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You won't believe how long I've been waiting for Johnny to say that line.

Two points of interest here:

Meet May C Oakley in Panel 2.  Last month I got a deal on a program I always wanted to get:  RPG Maker VX Ace.  I always wanted to try out making a RPG but I couldn't afford that program until Steam offered a deep discount.  A fellow Contributor, Van Kadix, is helping me with a good amount of the coding, but I'm doing the story and artwork.

Of course, I wanted to make a sort of easy (???) project to learn the program and not do anything like putting some of my prior IP into it (like Blood and Metal), and I decided to use an idea that I have in my notebooks somewhere, a new IP set in the Ballad of Johnny Briz world titled "Revolver Princess".  Mary is the player character, who is about to inherit an amusement park that unknowest to her parents was set in the rubble of an fairy-tale like kingdom that predates the time of the Indians.  That's all I'll tell you about for now; more will come later as I work on it.

And in the last panel, there's something some of my readers would want to see. Alex becoming Leone.  He'll explain the smart eye-wear device on his head as he puts on the costume.
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PorygonV [2014-03-17 22:54:08 +0000 UTC]

Quick notes:

Panel 3: Johnny's first speech bubble is missing its punctuation, and subsequent bubbles he's speaking use a different font.
Panel 4: There's a bump tangent between the guy on the right's (I can't remember if it's Jase or Ash) hand and the side of the opening between the two characters.
Panel 6: Jase and Ash look considerably... less good in comparison to other panels.
Panel 7: Alex looks pretty well represented, and more properly proportioned in comparison to the people with who he is talking. Let's try and do more of this!

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davidfoxfire In reply to PorygonV [2014-03-17 23:41:46 +0000 UTC]

Panel 3 can be easily fixed.  Much more than the bump tangent (that slipped past me! Darn it!) and the other problems.  But Panel 7 is a lot better in my proportions eh?  Something for me to work with for the other characters.  Much apprecaited on the tips.

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PorygonV In reply to PorygonV [2014-03-17 22:57:35 +0000 UTC]

Also, none of the characters have eye highlights; not even Johnny.

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WildDancer101 [2014-03-17 07:03:29 +0000 UTC]

Lol on the last panel.
Keep it up. 

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ClarktoonCrossing [2014-03-17 04:41:55 +0000 UTC]

No more pizza?

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davidfoxfire In reply to ClarktoonCrossing [2014-03-17 06:00:50 +0000 UTC]

Johnny:  Here.  Have a slice

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ClarktoonCrossing In reply to davidfoxfire [2014-03-17 12:15:32 +0000 UTC]

{grabs it and eats it up like Cookie Monster} AM NAM NAMANSNADNAMAND!!!

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