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Last panel, Juan's text lacks proper spacing between words: "with you" "for years" and "what is he".
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Like with Jennifer, this is made to show that Juan (the character Leone is talking to) tends to talk too fast. Reference at this foxfirestudios.net/johnnybriz/… . However, If that bit doesn't work out well, I can always change it.
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Yes, I think it does need to be changed. No need for two characters to talk like that when excited. Some people stutter, or some might go speechless. It helps to make your characters different and more realistic.
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All right then, I'll make the change after Encounters tonight. Thanks for the tip.
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