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Susan is a character almost as old as Johnny is, and was thought up by a close online friend of mine. And the two of them have been seen together in many a Role Play.

It only was natural for her to show up in "The Ballad of Johnny Briz," [link] and she enters the scene in the second act.

They find her much like they found Johnny; exhausted in the bushes one 'magical' day. At first she was terrified over seeing humans, even smaller humans than what she's used to, but once they calmed her down, they found out that what brought her here was traumatic enough to block her memory. Something about her village being destroyed. Thinking that her old life is behind her, and seeing this hunkasaurus of a mousie (Johnny) she joins the group.

They discover two things while she's with them. While normally, shy, sweet, and croquettish in general but "I want to get in Johnny's pants" in particular, she's got something Bronies would call a "Super Fluttershy Mode" Whenever she sees Johnny or his friends in danger, she shifts into a combat style that would make Jun Kasama jealous.

But what is more unnerving is how she acts stange around Max Lantz, almost as if she falls into a trance. It is eventually discovered that she couldn't remember what happened between the destruction of her village and getting found by JB because she was brainwashed by Max to woo Johnny and bring him to his company.

However, there was something Max didn't count on: JB and Susan's mating, which while based in a biological drive to procreate, but with their evolved makeup puts up a spiritual form as well. Her feelings for Johnny and the desire to be his mate starts to crack through her programming, and in a pivotal moment, Johnny breaks it with a deep wet toe curling Get-a-Fsking-Room kiss of passion.

Edit: In the official script, Max has another scheme that deals with her, but it eventually gets thwarted nonetheless.

At that point, Max decides to just go all out and set into motion a scheme that will lead to his climatic battle with Johnny. But it also prompts Susan to be Johnny's devoted wife and partner, hopefully with their relationship out in the open instead of what Mickey and Minnie has to deal with. ("I think they had to fake it after all these years.")

Looking back on the pic, however, I think that I have the pose wonky between the hips and the waist. Although I'm not too concerned. I just wanted to set up the character at this time.

Susan Traveller by Drew Rhine *ScarletFoxfire

Edit 1: I decided. No More Polka Dots. Imagine having to draw them all into almost every page. No wonder my "Keep it Simple, $#!*head" warning bell rang!

This means that Amber's 'Minnie Mouse style' dress will be altered. Probably with either larger dots or with solid colros like in the cartoons.

The reason behind the School Uniform is mostly because I didn't find anything else more appropiate at this time. (I'll be sure to get some store catalogs in the future) and that she needed a look that resembles a classic 'toon, hence the red , white (you can see the difference between white cloth and white fur (Warm vs Cool) and black outfit.

I'm sure that they'll find some other colors for her to wear over time. (meaning, me, of course)

Edit 2: Thanks go to #NewToontownUSA to add her to the group. Just keep in mind that she's still curious about the new world she's in, and that she's pretty much Johnny Briz's Minnie. I hope that some scenarios in the group would help me develop Susan better. If there's any suggestions, please let me know.

Description
Susan is a character almost as old as Johnny is, and was thought up by a close online friend of mine. And the two of them have been seen together in many a Role Play.

It only was natural for her to show up in "The Ballad of Johnny Briz," [link] and she enters the scene in the second act.

They find her much like they found Johnny; exhausted in the bushes one 'magical' day. At first she was terrified over seeing humans, even smaller humans than what she's used to, but once they calmed her down, they found out that what brought her here was traumatic enough to block her memory. Something about her village being destroyed. Thinking that her old life is behind her, and seeing this hunkasaurus of a mousie (Johnny) she joins the group.

They discover two things while she's with them. While normally, shy, sweet, and croquettish in general but "I want to get in Johnny's pants" in particular, she's got something Bronies would call a "Super Fluttershy Mode" Whenever she sees Johnny or his friends in danger, she shifts into a combat style that would make Jun Kasama jealous.

But what is more unnerving is how she acts stange around Max Lantz, almost as if she falls into a trance. It is eventually discovered that she couldn't remember what happened between the destruction of her village and getting found by JB because she was brainwashed by Max to woo Johnny and bring him to his company.

However, there was something Max didn't count on: JB and Susan's mating, which while based in a biological drive to procreate, but with their evolved makeup puts up a spiritual form as well. Her feelings for Johnny and the desire to be his mate starts to crack through her programming, and in a pivotal moment, Johnny breaks it with a deep wet toe curling Get-a-Fsking-Room kiss of passion.

Edit: In the official script, Max has another scheme that deals with her, but it eventually gets thwarted nonetheless.

At that point, Max decides to just go all out and set into motion a scheme that will lead to his climatic battle with Johnny. But it also prompts Susan to be Johnny's devoted wife and partner, hopefully with their relationship out in the open instead of what Mickey and Minnie has to deal with. ("I think they had to fake it after all these years.")

Looking back on the pic, however, I think that I have the pose wonky between the hips and the waist. Although I'm not too concerned. I just wanted to set up the character at this time.

Susan Traveller by Drew Rhine *ScarletFoxfire

Edit 1: I decided. No More Polka Dots. Imagine having to draw them all into almost every page. No wonder my "Keep it Simple, $#!*head" warning bell rang!

This means that Amber's 'Minnie Mouse style' dress will be altered. Probably with either larger dots or with solid colros like in the cartoons.

The reason behind the School Uniform is mostly because I didn't find anything else more appropiate at this time. (I'll be sure to get some store catalogs in the future) and that she needed a look that resembles a classic 'toon, hence the red , white (you can see the difference between white cloth and white fur (Warm vs Cool) and black outfit.

I'm sure that they'll find some other colors for her to wear over time. (meaning, me, of course)

Edit 2: Thanks go to #NewToontownUSA to add her to the group. Just keep in mind that she's still curious about the new world she's in, and that she's pretty much Johnny Briz's Minnie. I hope that some scenarios in the group would help me develop Susan better. If there's any suggestions, please let me know.