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daybreaksmiles — to practice what you preach
Published: 2015-07-13 04:08:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 653; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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Description "It's funny" my dad says
with a drawn face that doesn't
make me want to laugh
one bit,
"He had that preacher look.
Whatever that is, he had it."

He wasn't wrong.
The man in the sliver casket
looked different now
but a week ago, a month, a year
he could have been a
fixture in anyone's home.
Gaze sharp and belly full he was
a man who looked like love
and spoke like kindness and
held on tight like honesty.
He was the uncle dozing in the living room
after Sunday supper, the father
who harbors patience for every small
and excitable thing.

Something in that gentle smile as he
pat you on the head at the end of the day,
saying it was one well spent,
felt like coming home.
He had that preacher look.
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Comments: 8

shep4life [2015-08-02 14:22:32 +0000 UTC]

I love the words

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daybreaksmiles In reply to shep4life [2015-08-05 04:34:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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shep4life In reply to daybreaksmiles [2015-08-05 15:17:25 +0000 UTC]

Anytime

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Writingangel2010 [2015-07-13 17:03:22 +0000 UTC]

This is wonderful! 

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daybreaksmiles In reply to Writingangel2010 [2015-07-13 19:20:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you you're too kind.

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literaryintoxication [2015-07-13 04:27:21 +0000 UTC]

I really liked this I like how you explained how he had that "preacher look" because my idea of a "preacher look" was quite different until I read on. And your description is just so good

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daybreaksmiles In reply to literaryintoxication [2015-07-13 19:19:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! Yes I figured everyone would have a different idea of how preachers appear, especially people of different denominations (I'm most familiar with Baptist and Methodist preachers) or who do not attend church at all. I'm glad the descriptions were enough to channel my ideas  

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literaryintoxication In reply to daybreaksmiles [2015-07-14 01:08:05 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

Exactly! But yes, you were able to channel your ideas through your descriptions

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