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Don't look at me and try to see meThe way they all think they do.
My face is not who I am.
I could say, look deep into these eyes
And you will find my heart, my soul
But that wouldn't be true.
You wouldn't see me for who I am.
You could listen to me, talking to you
Listen to every syllable of each word,
Hearing the meaning, understanding my mind
Yet my voice can only be an echo
Of the real me.
But when I write
All that changes, setting me free
Ink is never ignorant
Paper doesn't lie.
Read...
The shape of every letter
And between the lines
You just might see the true me.
Like my face,
Every word stares up at you,
Imploring to be understood.
You can't read my expression half as well.
Don't just look at me -
Read me
See me for what I am.
No longer boring, annoying...
Maybe almost as weird!
But writing makes me feel
Appreciated
As being more than
What's on the outside.
Read me for who I am.
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Comments: 18
Dovesong13 [2012-03-04 18:08:13 +0000 UTC]
I can so relate to this! So true, and very well written!
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Gary-thedreamingpoet [2011-12-31 13:58:15 +0000 UTC]
I like it very much and boy do I relate to every word you've written! Brilliant work
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Vegetabelle [2011-12-22 10:11:07 +0000 UTC]
THIS IS INCREDIBLE! I love it. I completely relate, and I couldn't have said it better.
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CertifiedJesusFreak [2011-11-23 20:59:02 +0000 UTC]
This is fantastic<3 I totally agree. I'm still in school, which sucks, but people label me the freak because I sit and write or draw, or talk to my friends about things no one understands but us.
You know what? Read what I write (Not that they'd get it.) and you'd get me pretty freakin' loud and clear.
Fantastic poem, I love it and you. to all!
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The-Random-Dreamer In reply to CertifiedJesusFreak [2011-11-24 08:52:05 +0000 UTC]
That 1st sentence totally applies to me too!
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The-Random-Dreamer In reply to The-Random-Dreamer [2011-12-21 12:33:00 +0000 UTC]
i meant the 1st paragraph.
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BookWyrm144 [2011-11-09 04:39:31 +0000 UTC]
I think you will find many people who can relate to this. Wonderfully captured.
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The-Random-Dreamer In reply to BookWyrm144 [2011-11-09 08:54:46 +0000 UTC]
Yay. Thankyou.
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BookWyrm144 In reply to The-Random-Dreamer [2011-11-11 17:05:33 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome.
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CassAllsworth [2011-06-03 13:04:50 +0000 UTC]
This is a Beautiful poem,i can really relate to it,it expresses how i feel too,thankyou for writing it,it made me feel better. Your a talented poet!
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The-Random-Dreamer In reply to CassAllsworth [2011-06-03 13:10:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I just love writing fiction/stories but I occasionally write poems but i thought all my poems were rubbish.
Would you like to join my group for literature, "WritingIsFreedom"? It's not very good but we need more members!
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CassAllsworth In reply to The-Random-Dreamer [2011-06-03 13:18:09 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome! Yes,i'll join,thankyou for inviting me.I wish you all the best at becoming a writer,cause you have alot of talent!
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