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The-Random-Dreamer — Into The Unknown
Published: 2014-03-20 19:49:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 294; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description You’ve staggered up the last
Few metres, scrambling over rocks, and now
There you stand, feet overhanging the
Edge of the
Immense cliff that
Drops, suddenly,
Relentlessly,
Before you, what lies beneath too far away below to see
Yet so close you’d only have to take one step forward
And you’d be there
Unable to turn back
Bitter wind through your hair, on your face as you look, bravely
Into the future.

Behind you a sun sets; in front, in the inconceivable distance
Another rises, illuminating an endless, winding road stretching away
Through a deserted landscape
Scattered with the occasional forest, hill and stream
Like events you’ve planned but not yet experienced
Everything else is
Unknown, until you take that step
The mountainside at your back fades into
Darkness, oblivion
Soon you’ll have no choice but to
Tumble
Helplessly
Into whatever lies beyond
This moment is your one chance to reflect on
Where you are, where you’re going
Teetering on the
Edge of the precipice
Stirring together an enticing mixture
Of anticipation and dread
Knowing only that, this time, everything will change.
Do you feel ready?
No one ever does.
You lift your gaze to the newly rising sun,
Take a deep
Breath, and step
Off the edge.

There’s no going back.
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Comments: 6

BookWormMK [2014-04-09 11:18:08 +0000 UTC]

I've seen plenty of poems in this fashion, but this is one of the very few if this type that I actually like. It's well written.

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The-Random-Dreamer In reply to BookWormMK [2014-04-09 18:25:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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BookWormMK In reply to The-Random-Dreamer [2014-04-10 09:53:15 +0000 UTC]

Welcome.

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SaintsSauce [2014-04-05 18:05:00 +0000 UTC]

This is a deep poem. Great job!

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The-Random-Dreamer In reply to SaintsSauce [2014-04-06 10:47:51 +0000 UTC]

thankyou!

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SaintsSauce In reply to The-Random-Dreamer [2014-04-06 14:11:45 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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