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Every drop of doubt that fallsLeaves an echo of ripples in your reflection.
I want to gouge my fingers into this uncertainty
And read you like a book, but
The chapters of your dark side make me reconsider.
Each page reveals a potential twist and turn,
And danger, so much danger for such a fragile heart.
What if on the last page I realize the story is just fiction?
You are
Uncontrollable, your thirst is
Unquenchable and who am I to
Shut your eyes from your own lust?
My hold is loose when fate and
Lack of faith are gnawing at your covers.
What I fear most is not you waking up to somebody else,
But you waking up as somebody else entirely.
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Comments: 18
Pirokyo [2013-10-29 19:08:35 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful. A fear that is often hard to preset. What do you think it means when someone reads your last page?
gauge=gouge?
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sasunaru16 In reply to Pirokyo [2013-12-11 22:55:49 +0000 UTC]
oh dear, thank you for pointing that out I corrected it now
It is the turning point - the decision on whether you love the book or notΒ
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Pirokyo In reply to sasunaru16 [2013-12-27 08:15:10 +0000 UTC]
You're quite welcome, dear.
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sasunaru16 In reply to Annibellee [2013-12-11 22:57:14 +0000 UTC]
interesting emotions my feelings about this piece are mixed.. slight sadness but bittersweet gladness.
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Taterchip5001 [2013-10-06 03:54:16 +0000 UTC]
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Have a great day!
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Siipis [2013-10-05 00:56:49 +0000 UTC]
Very clever poetry about a subject that's usually riddled with clichΓ©s. Nice work!
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truthwrite [2013-10-05 00:39:06 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful, simply no other words I can think of to describe it. Nice job.Β
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SpiritDuchess [2013-10-04 20:26:29 +0000 UTC]
Simply exquisite.Β
I withdraw my heart and revel in your light
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sasunaru16 In reply to SpiritDuchess [2014-01-19 19:42:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! You always astound me with your wonderful comments
My poems are just feelings on paper, I am sure if you were the author, the complexity and vocabulary used would be far better
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SpiritDuchess In reply to sasunaru16 [2014-01-26 22:44:52 +0000 UTC]
Do not diminish that candle that burns fierce.
The feelings, on paper, drawn and draw
us into ourselves through the very you.
Thus it is
that true art and beauty
becomes this very definition.
I am not author.
I am the mere audience
that falls to your words,
full of joy,
filled with essence,
that lifts me to greatness
and gratitude
for you.
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sasunaru16 In reply to SpiritDuchess [2014-04-10 22:10:21 +0000 UTC]
oh dear, you are wonderful !
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