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'The Wicked Dandy'
Chapter n°1: 'vs The Spark Maiden'
Page n°3
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"Since I'm really far from having a completely satisfying English speaking and earing level I'll ask you to
tell me for each page if you spot an error/mistake/lapse or if you have a suggestion concerning the
text/dialog or (more importantly) onomatopoeia."
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The cops would question someone who can wield fire
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Ah, the vigilante's plight. Even if you mean well the cops don't take kindly to you getting in their way.
I really like the inclusion of the little heads illustrating the scenario in the middle panels. They're cute and are an interesting way of explaining her reasoning.
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Thanks... I always had a slight doubt about this...
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so she doesn't want to talk to the Police. Hmmmm I wonder why...
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It's a classic that police doesn't like the heros/heroines. It always seemed logical to me since that, after all, they are citizens who puts themselves and others citizens in danger when they are crimefighting (not to mention the damages to the public goods 
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