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Published: 2015-04-05 17:22:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 2825; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 27
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Description Sunday mornings you can find me at the Farmers Market in Hollywood, down near the Arclight theater and Amoeba Records. I'm fond of my fresh produce and fresh Greek food, plus the long walk there and back is great.

Most Sundays Jacqueline is there writing poems for people on any subject. Two weeks ago I asked her to write me one on "Procrastination", something I've been having problems with recently. You might call it writers block but procrastination is what it feels like to me as the ideas are there in my head but I'm having trouble motivating myself to type it out.

This is her poem;

Procrastination

That tug and tangle
pulls us into pause.
That distraction that
takes away our focus
and has us fester
in nothingness. How
can we turn away, make
action take the lead
and so slip freely into
motion? Aim well and rest
often, find a rhythm and
let it be, & look deeply
into the reasons behind
this waiting game.

-jacqueline suskin
march 2015

I've taken the first step in acknowledging it is a problem, not I must take action!

But then, this very entry might be me procrastinating doing the writing I should be doing instead...



Procrastination ©2015 Jacquelin Suskin
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Comments: 36

AlphaWulf99 [2015-08-12 23:34:53 +0000 UTC]

Wow...So classy,and classical:3

Cool

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DeevElliott In reply to AlphaWulf99 [2015-08-15 23:48:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks AW!

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makepictures [2015-07-01 02:05:30 +0000 UTC]

Same poet, and a different commission, on climbing up the very steep hill right after a heart procedure: POEMOnce a week on the top of a hill overlooking Hollywood there is a farmer's market with a poet.

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DeevElliott In reply to makepictures [2015-07-01 02:13:51 +0000 UTC]

She's looking good for just having a heart procedure. Her heart is definitely in it.

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makepictures In reply to DeevElliott [2015-07-01 07:26:29 +0000 UTC]

No, I was the one who had the procedure and that was the poem I commissioned.

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TheGalleryOfEve [2015-06-30 21:52:04 +0000 UTC]

Aawww I love everything about her Dave!!! Her outfit, the table, the typewriter, her writing skills!!! My goodness, to be able to write like that must be amazing!!! ... Her whole idea is just pure awesome!!!

Now I have a doubt in regards to category and maybe hosagu can shed some light for me here ... What would be the difference between a spontaneous portrait and street photography??? Because if it was my picture, I would have probably uploaded it as Street Photography ... (This might be a good article inspiration for someone to write about it on "Street Photography" week on projecteducate )

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DeevElliott In reply to TheGalleryOfEve [2015-07-01 00:27:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I admire her ability to sit there and spontaneously come up with a poem on any subject. That takes mad skills and she has my full and undying admiration for it.

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TheGalleryOfEve In reply to DeevElliott [2015-07-01 18:15:22 +0000 UTC]

Some people have that genius in them, and to them it might be even something imperceptible, I'm sure she must think it's a common thing, nothing really "special" If only she knew, Dave!!!

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DeevElliott In reply to TheGalleryOfEve [2015-07-01 19:36:32 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad she has found a way to channel her talent in a way she make money from it. That's a major battle won right there!



     

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TheGalleryOfEve In reply to DeevElliott [2015-07-01 22:55:46 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh yes!!! I totally admire her for finding her creative niche I'm glad you took that photo, it's pretty inspiring, even for those of us who are not writers

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hosagu In reply to TheGalleryOfEve [2015-06-30 23:59:16 +0000 UTC]

Hey Sweetheart
That is very kind of you to think about me regarding the category here. I'd say DeevElliott categorized rightly his shot
I wouldn't put it in street since despite the candid and unstaged situation, it's related to an activity (a wonderful one) not depicting an humorous or let's say funny street situation. I'm not restricting street shots to funny or ironic situations, but here the shot is showing a Lady whose activity is to write poems in the street. There is a story beyond it, but not a situation or interaction pushing the watcher to smile or react like seeing a human being in her/his interaction with her/his environment...
Dammit woman, I'm just not sure anymore I made a clear statement

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TheGalleryOfEve In reply to hosagu [2015-07-01 18:21:16 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh my goodness Houman!!! You have no idea how much I've learned from this explanation!!! I will be hooked to this week's PE series of articles, because if I learned all this through a brief comment, I can't possibly imagine all I will learn about this subject in those articles!!!
Thank you SO much for taking the time to respond to this, I know you're super busy, but you always do your best to help out, I love you my friend!!!

Yes, yes!!! I got you!!! Basically, Street Photography is actually even more spontaneous than a spontaneous photo

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hosagu In reply to TheGalleryOfEve [2015-07-02 03:08:04 +0000 UTC]



You're so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet Eve...!!!    
Couldn't dare possibly to guess I'd be able to help you that much...
I will always have time for anyone around here, for any Deviant, I'm a fellow willing happy servant to the Community
and even more for you Woman especially since I know you want to make me odd things by being my nurse
Please do it!!!!! Go and read the articles, your input, thoughts, feedback and critiques are outrageously important to me!
Love U Woman

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TheGalleryOfEve In reply to hosagu [2015-07-07 20:17:04 +0000 UTC]

AAwwwwwwwww!!!!!!

I know!!! ()

Ohhh yes you have helped me tremendously, I had an amazing time reading through those articles on projecteducate 's Street Photography week!!! You have helped a lot of people, because that genre of photography used to be kinda confusing a little bit So you guys have put a ton of clarity on it now!!!

Ooohhhhh yeah, baby!!!

Well I'm learning so critiques at this point feel unattainable to me, I hope someday to truly dare to do it (Gosh if you only knew how SHY I am in person!!! Hahahahaha I must first fight my shyness if I want to shoot in the street like you do!!! ), and when I'll do it, I hope I get really good at it, so that I can give good critiques

Love U 2 Houmannnnnnnn!!!!!!! Almost ike this --->  "almost"

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hosagu In reply to TheGalleryOfEve [2015-07-08 08:24:39 +0000 UTC]

omg Woman The perfect compliment: to be your nutella...!!!
You just don't have to fight your shyness You just have to let your inner feelings drive you when shooting

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TheGalleryOfEve In reply to hosagu [2015-07-13 23:24:30 +0000 UTC]

Ok, be my Nutella, come here

Pppffff that's easy for you to say

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hosagu In reply to TheGalleryOfEve [2015-07-15 03:02:06 +0000 UTC]

Nope Eve... I'm a shy boy too...
But I got it Life is precious and to be lived intensively... No regrets, just actions and pleasure and fun (hopefully...)

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KCKinny [2015-04-08 05:13:28 +0000 UTC]

Hmm I've heard mention of her before.  Interesting shtick.
Yep, I'm gonna say that you're procrastinating by posting.  I recognize you, fellow procrastinator.
For instance, at this very moment, I may be fleeing from learning how to use my scriptwriting program.  Which in turn is me fleeing from writing the story I need to convert to script form.  Which is ultimately procrastination.

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DeevElliott In reply to KCKinny [2015-04-08 20:23:52 +0000 UTC]

Are you Procrastinating? No?! You're missing out! It's the fun new thing that everyone is doing!!!

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KCKinny In reply to DeevElliott [2015-04-09 02:28:33 +0000 UTC]

Dear god, you're right!  Why haven't I been wasting my time with such deadly efficiency before?!

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DeevElliott In reply to KCKinny [2015-04-09 10:15:02 +0000 UTC]

No need to thank me!!

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MARX77 [2015-04-05 21:34:02 +0000 UTC]

I hear ya, brother

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DeevElliott In reply to MARX77 [2015-04-05 23:25:52 +0000 UTC]

It's the same every wee

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tsunamicomix [2015-04-05 21:32:58 +0000 UTC]

I adore her just for using a typewriter!  I used to think I was a procrastinator beyond compare, but I realized that the part of my brain that stores ideas is surrounded by razor wire guarded by Dobermans.  It doesn't want me in there, and there's days when I just don't have what it takes to go in with the bolt cutters and stun gun to get into the vault.

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DeevElliott In reply to tsunamicomix [2015-04-05 23:24:53 +0000 UTC]

Get the dobermans drunk once in a while.

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tsunamicomix In reply to DeevElliott [2015-04-06 01:33:27 +0000 UTC]

I agree!  Time to pick up a 6 pack of Fosters.  

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DeevElliott In reply to tsunamicomix [2015-04-06 01:43:55 +0000 UTC]

"Fosters"? I think i know where you're going wrong...

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tsunamicomix In reply to DeevElliott [2015-04-06 03:31:15 +0000 UTC]

I tried "Heineken," but all they did was start barking in Dutch. 

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DeevElliott In reply to tsunamicomix [2015-04-06 03:59:13 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha!!



Try Guinness next time.

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C1nderellaMan [2015-04-05 21:20:35 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic.  Poems offered on the fly with a typewriter, like advice from Lucy.  I have my retirement goal.

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DeevElliott In reply to C1nderellaMan [2015-04-05 23:26:51 +0000 UTC]

I wonder how well I'd do setting up and giving advice about the comics industry?

    

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C1nderellaMan In reply to DeevElliott [2015-04-06 10:41:29 +0000 UTC]

Maybe give a quick line-art illustration for your advice, with you drawn sitting behind a Lucy "psychiatric help" stand (or some similar structure)  providing it.   

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DeevElliott In reply to C1nderellaMan [2015-04-07 20:41:39 +0000 UTC]

"quick line-art illustration"? For me there ain't such a thing!

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psycocat [2015-04-05 18:20:56 +0000 UTC]

I oft find the best way to break the writer's block is to hammer it with a pencil (to doodle or write nonsense).  Also putting down my game controller ...

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DeevElliott In reply to psycocat [2015-04-05 18:35:12 +0000 UTC]

Or post on DA...

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psycocat In reply to DeevElliott [2015-04-05 21:19:14 +0000 UTC]

LoL

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