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DefeatedThoughts — I cant help but admit
Published: 2007-07-17 02:44:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Sometimes our heart's
can be so confusing
and sometimes our
minds can be so disputing.

With all of my heart...
yes, i love you so.
with all of my mind...
i tell myself yes, you
do too.

As i sit here in my house
hundreds of miles away
from you I cant help
but admit that i miss
you. and i cant help
but admit...that without
you this doesnt feel
anything like "home".

Maybe that's because
"home is where the heart is"
and mine is most definitly
out there with you.

and i cant help
but admit that
most nights i go
to bed feeling empty.
because your out
there without me.

and i'd like you
to know that your
all i need out of
this life. If I
could keep you forever
that would be nice...
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Comments: 17

Phex913 [2007-07-18 01:47:47 +0000 UTC]

Wow. You put complicated emotions into words so easily. When I try to express something like that it comes out a mess.

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to Phex913 [2007-07-18 01:50:18 +0000 UTC]

lol well at least someone thinks i do lol...cause i dont think i do lol.

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sachiyumi [2007-07-17 03:07:45 +0000 UTC]

wow 2 poems in one night! i cant even write a single decent one lol love this

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to sachiyumi [2007-07-17 03:14:10 +0000 UTC]

lol no there's more than 2!! lol ...someone got me out of my writers block..hmm..shucks..who could that be lol.

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sachiyumi In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-07-17 03:27:41 +0000 UTC]

oh yea theres another 2 coming!! oh my goodness!! you mustve been visited by the poem fairy lol you should take advantage of it as much as you could!! lol ohhh i just cant help these ss!!!11 seriously lol

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to sachiyumi [2007-07-17 03:39:57 +0000 UTC]

lol yea! the poem fairy! lol. yep i love the ss too!!!!11 lol and im serious too lol.

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sachiyumi In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-07-17 03:45:20 +0000 UTC]

lol there you go! lol man.. we just kept on ing lol

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to sachiyumi [2007-07-17 03:56:59 +0000 UTC]

crap...ok well i forgot to hit the reply button and i replied to it in another comment lol. i hate when i do that lol. but yea...we do again lol. ha ha but yea hugs are good. they make people happy lol.

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sachiyumi In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-07-17 04:05:21 +0000 UTC]

lol soo much s lol theyre all over the place lol.. well here..

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to sachiyumi [2007-07-17 15:29:35 +0000 UTC]

lol yeaaaaa high fives! lol.

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to sachiyumi [2007-07-17 03:55:33 +0000 UTC]

lol we do lol. oh well lol. hugs are good lol. they make people happy lol.

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oneXonMars In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-07-17 03:27:23 +0000 UTC]

what's writers block?

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to oneXonMars [2007-07-17 03:38:12 +0000 UTC]

like..where you cant write anything...like....you just...like..your blocked lol...from writing...hard to explain unless you've felt it lol.

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oneXonMars In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-07-17 03:41:24 +0000 UTC]

okayyyyyyyy....*sammies bipolar*lmao!!!! i still think the bennett's are bipolar...it's genetic...lol

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sachiyumi In reply to oneXonMars [2007-07-17 03:52:05 +0000 UTC]

lol shes funny lol

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to oneXonMars [2007-07-17 03:51:41 +0000 UTC]

lol ha ha. i really think i am though! lol..

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oneXonMars In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-07-17 04:45:18 +0000 UTC]

lmao i now i am i need help...lol

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