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DefeatedThoughts — Loving and Leaving
Published: 2007-03-21 00:41:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 75; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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I love you now, and i'll love you still.I will love you till the bitter end.
What i do now is not out of hatred,
but out of hope that you will find someone better to hold in the end.
I'm leaving when the dawn comes and there's no stopping me now.
Shh, dont make a sound.
I know you dont understand, but you will soon enough.
I am not your true love I am sorry to admit,
and out of everyone you deserve something better than this.
So im leaving when the dawn comes and there's no stopping me now.
Would you let me hold you one last time?
Before I cease to cross your mind?
You ask "how could you do this" and i simply reply,
You are amazing and i can not deny,
That my love for you will never die.
So im leaving when the dawn comes and there's no stopping me now.
Never doubt that i won't be near when you need someone to lend an ear.
I'm always here for you, in happiness or tears.
So i'm leaving when the dawn comes and there's no stopping me now.
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thanks. im glad it did.
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wow there is a lot of emotion in this piece again!
i really like it my favorite of yours i have read so far.
i would liek to suggest two things for you if you like
1) *RawEm0tion
2) ~proems
proems is my club i made for poetry and prose and rawem0tion is a sister club to proems and much bigger. its for emotional poets 
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kool i will check those out. i've been kinda..stuck on the poetry lately. i havent been able to write anything. but thanks for the compliment! it's much appreciated.
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your very welcome, yes definitely check them out they are a very close knit community and very accepting. im sure you will feel right at home
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i liked it very much so...not sure if i understood everything (i'm a little slow sometimes haha), but i still liked it
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ha ha. i'm not sure if i even understood everything! 
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