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DefeatedThoughts — My soul Divided
Published: 2007-04-08 01:31:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 105; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description My soul divided,
between good and evil,
above wrong and right.

During the spaces of time
i dont hear an answer,
floating free, crying out loud

I wanna be heard
but no one's around.
save me from this life.

My soul divided,
between good and evil,
above wrong and right.

I can't see the light.
It's dark and distant here.
I'm feeling my way along the wall,
but there is emptyness all around.

I'm drowning in fear,
catching my tears.
why can't i breath?
why can't i see?

My soul divided,
between good and evil,
above wrong and right.

I'm falling, falling for eternity
with no one at the end to catch me.
So why can't i breath? why can't i see?

I'm swallowing fears,
crying out tears
that just keep flowing.

my mind has left me.
it's out to get me...

My soul divided,
between good and evil,
above wrong and right.
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Comments: 10

BrooklynNight [2007-06-29 00:44:02 +0000 UTC]

that has to be my favorite poem of yours yet, this was amazing i swear. I could almost feel the emotion as i read it (if that makes sense), great writing ^_^

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to BrooklynNight [2007-06-29 02:33:52 +0000 UTC]

lol thank you.

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clow-reed16 [2007-05-31 00:53:28 +0000 UTC]

wow thats very good!

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to clow-reed16 [2007-05-31 16:28:54 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks. this is probably my least favorite poem of mine though. it was the very first one i wrote. =/

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clow-reed16 In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-05-31 22:03:28 +0000 UTC]

lol well we all have to start somewhere my first song was major shit.

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to clow-reed16 [2007-06-01 00:17:11 +0000 UTC]

lol probably not. YOU probably just thought that..just like i think this poem is one of my worst lol.

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clow-reed16 In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-06-01 00:27:38 +0000 UTC]

hahah okay well let me just give you the first lines:

"hot hot hot
i gotta have that butt butt butt
gotta have some cushion for the pushin
and she is hot hot hot
too bad your not not not"

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to clow-reed16 [2007-06-01 00:35:21 +0000 UTC]

oops forgot to press the reply button lol..the reply is below...lol

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to clow-reed16 [2007-06-01 00:33:56 +0000 UTC]

lol ha ha! i like it! ...well...it made me laugh! lol.

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clow-reed16 In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-06-01 01:00:32 +0000 UTC]

lol that was the idea when i wrote it but i mean its just not very good. that was the best part, the chorus. the verse's just sucked hahah i dont even remember them

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