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Demachic — Optimistic Heart

Published: 2011-05-10 20:29:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 78471; Favourites: 4653; Downloads: 261
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Omg you guys ; u ; I didn't think this poem would get such overwhelming response :'D I love you all


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Poem about being bad at writing and english literary related things. @u@

Misspellings and random comma placement makes the poem deeper ahahahaha

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advidauthor In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 16:24:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh god. Too cute for words. It could just be the smiley heart at the end, but this is just so adorable~<3

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Demachic In reply to advidauthor [2011-07-02 02:11:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you C:

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advidauthor In reply to Demachic [2011-07-02 22:33:48 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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chiapple In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 16:23:48 +0000 UTC]

Love it

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Demachic In reply to chiapple [2011-07-02 02:11:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! =]

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rubberbend In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 16:09:04 +0000 UTC]

Aww
It's adorable
and you're adorable.

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Demachic In reply to rubberbend [2011-05-11 17:43:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

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ayeshoo123 In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 16:06:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm not too good at literature either xD I took it because I'm never gonna have a chance to learn about literature (or rather be taught lit) ever again after school!

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Demachic In reply to ayeshoo123 [2011-05-11 17:42:53 +0000 UTC]

Ahh I see (: haha

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ayeshoo123 In reply to Demachic [2011-05-11 19:19:24 +0000 UTC]

C:

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MyInterpretation92 In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 16:05:08 +0000 UTC]

I used this text and translate into italian for a Facebook page note here:
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Hope you agree... anyway amazing poetry!

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Demachic In reply to MyInterpretation92 [2011-05-11 17:40:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Very cool! Thank you!

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cros-s In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 16:00:17 +0000 UTC]

how inspiring

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Demachic In reply to cros-s [2011-05-11 17:39:58 +0000 UTC]

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lizziemariestar In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 15:38:09 +0000 UTC]

you should give yourself credit its actually really good lol there isnt one auther of any thing who hasnt arleast mispelled one word ever i like it cuz im bad in english too and i get inspiration from horror or bad things happinin to people so.... yeah urz is very well done

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Demachic In reply to lizziemariestar [2011-07-02 02:19:22 +0000 UTC]

Ahw thank you! That's a really lovely comment!

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lizziemariestar In reply to Demachic [2011-07-17 18:51:18 +0000 UTC]

your welcome any time sweetie

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Kramzo In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 15:29:46 +0000 UTC]

What a good poem!
Really cute!

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Demachic In reply to Kramzo [2011-05-11 17:38:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you C:

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Cataclysm-X In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 15:25:26 +0000 UTC]

So thoughful and motivating

This should be anyone's way of thinking when feeling down because one doesn't possess the skill yet to make it happen

Amazing poem *Demachic

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Demachic In reply to Cataclysm-X [2011-05-11 17:38:46 +0000 UTC]

Gee wizz! What a nice comment! Thank you very much I'm glad you like it!

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Cataclysm-X In reply to Demachic [2011-05-11 20:40:07 +0000 UTC]

anytime m'dear

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shebeast2 In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 15:15:40 +0000 UTC]

absolutly xcellent!

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Demachic In reply to shebeast2 [2011-05-11 17:39:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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shebeast2 In reply to Demachic [2011-05-11 23:15:10 +0000 UTC]

np

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chasing-oceans In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 15:10:24 +0000 UTC]

The colours and the cute poem gave me the warm fuzzies this brightened my day thank you

--
"Four for you Glen Coco, you go Glen Coco!"

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Demachic In reply to chasing-oceans [2011-05-11 17:39:19 +0000 UTC]

Ahwww >w< Thank you for the lovely comment!

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CazyBunny In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 15:07:39 +0000 UTC]

aw sow cute x33

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Demachic In reply to CazyBunny [2011-05-11 17:39:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^^

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MorningGirl In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 15:02:20 +0000 UTC]

That's a wonderful poem!

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Demachic In reply to MorningGirl [2011-05-11 17:39:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much (:

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BBCastleGurl In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 15:00:11 +0000 UTC]

this is so cute.

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Demachic In reply to BBCastleGurl [2011-07-02 02:08:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Kaci-Star In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 14:59:46 +0000 UTC]

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Demachic In reply to Kaci-Star [2011-07-02 02:08:55 +0000 UTC]

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KiLin7 In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 14:56:28 +0000 UTC]

KEWT!

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Demachic In reply to KiLin7 [2011-07-02 02:08:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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LoviPoe In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 14:31:00 +0000 UTC]

loved it x3

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Demachic In reply to LoviPoe [2011-07-02 02:09:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you C:

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SilentLuminosity In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 14:16:34 +0000 UTC]

Punctuation has a t after the c but I totally understand~ <3 Very cute and hit all the reasons why I went Engineering~ <3 Made me smile today (:

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danekez In reply to SilentLuminosity [2011-05-11 14:24:47 +0000 UTC]

thats kind of the point, dearie. She said that there are purposeful misspellings here.

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SilentLuminosity In reply to danekez [2011-05-11 14:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Yes~ I got that. I thought it was amazingly adorable. So bad with text emphasis more like an ah-ha!

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Demachic In reply to SilentLuminosity [2011-05-12 18:44:51 +0000 UTC]

Yepp, as =danekez said, it was the point

BUT thank you for the VERY SWEET comment though! >w<

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SilentLuminosity In reply to Demachic [2011-05-12 20:18:51 +0000 UTC]

*throws confetti and cookies at* <3

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Mangodere In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 14:16:04 +0000 UTC]

this is cute. :3 i can see this being put in some english textbook for school lol

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Demachic In reply to Mangodere [2011-07-02 02:08:43 +0000 UTC]

Ahh :'D Thank you!!

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mistresstrista In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 14:11:08 +0000 UTC]

I love ittt D

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Demachic In reply to mistresstrista [2011-07-02 02:08:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^^

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mistresstrista In reply to Demachic [2011-07-05 21:24:01 +0000 UTC]

Yahh man

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Thoughtless-Birth In reply to ??? [2011-05-11 14:09:38 +0000 UTC]

haha... shweet!!!

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