HOME | DD
Destinyfall — Loss of divinity
Published: 2005-02-03 19:22:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 928; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 67
Redirect to original
Description
This is from one of my stories, Nocturn EternusOnce there was a girl and she was very lonely, she cried all the time and even her guardian angel could not talk to her, she would not listen anymore. One day her angel felt that soon she would take her life and if so would lose her soul to oblivion. So he climbed to the highest throne of heaven and there beneath God stood the Seraphim. The little guardian angel begged the Seraphim Nikolas to help him speak to the girl and save her from damnation. Nikolas new it was against rule but he could not let a girl lose her soul so he agreed and followed the little angel down to her room. Many days past and the Seraphim became friend with the girl and came to her every night, they would talk and she felt finally that she was not alone anymore but Nikolas new that soon he would have to leave her and it broke his heart. One night Nikolas sat alone outside the home of his beloved thinking when a familiar form appeared. Lucifer made the Seraphim a deal her couldn't resist; Eternal life and humanity, death and life, Body and soul as one. The Seraphim took the deal...
Related content
Comments: 42
you really got to wonder what is wrong with him ..... it didn't occur to him e was gonna get screwed
pun not intended lol
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
he was an innocent dolt and completely love struck which leads to trouble always LOL
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
well that's true..... but ummm.... what is a seraphim anyway it like a higher up angel or something... did he know the terms in advance or was he just told he'd be an immortal human???....
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Seraphim are the highest choir of angels, then Cherubim and so on... He was told he would be immortal but have flesh.... then AFTER the fact LOL while he was sick on his knees,,, he was told aout the perks like no sun no this aand that and surviving on blood >.>
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
ohh wonderful lol ...... the devils in the details lol..... I thought that the highest order spectrum.... opps..... spelling not my strong point.... knew about cherubium.... then arch ... than regular .... I think .... years since looked up ..
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
[link]
i am going by the 9 choirs of angels... and then adding my own bits and pieces to it really..
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
okay different the version I saw but ahhhh.... no bigy whatever works.... I like your stories
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Thats intense.. jesus, nice job, it's perfect..
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
argh thank you very much!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Oh my lord, the detail in your pencil-ling is impeccable. I love how you portray the blood from her mouth; it really draws your attention to the picture. kudos!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
..... thank you ^_^' But um hehe thats a guy XD But really thank you very much!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Oh sorry for the mix-up! I understand, alot of comments here have referred to Arrakis as "she" too, hehe.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
No prob ^_^ Thank you for the comment !
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
why thank you very much ^_~
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Where's the rest of the story??? Great shading by the way.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
your have to read the story... its on my devianart gallery [link] but its still only a little part of it... it wouldn't let get it all in there lol i will upload the other half one day when finished XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
thank you so much Ailo! * Hugs and loves*
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Very intense, very climatic. I love how the hair seamingly blends with the wing.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
thank you! yeah i wanted it to look like a changing was taking place and blending kinda does that ^_^ thank you again!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
