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Published: 2008-06-26 10:54:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 214; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Once again drawing from my Obitsu trying to get some better proportions going. Please give me some critiquing. I really want to get better. Personally I am very happy with this one.Related content
Comments: 7
Perpetualwolfsage [2008-06-28 01:06:58 +0000 UTC]
I agree with Aerith
She may need a little work on the feet. Most of it looks really good though ^.^ Really cute
Keep practicing hun
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AerithsSpirit [2008-06-27 14:26:33 +0000 UTC]
Coming along here. The legs look the most weird to me. They need to look more like they are on the ground via perspective.
Giving her a ground plane instead of having her float around may also help with the issue. Also need a little more work on her feet. I would try drawing them with the front part of the foot against the ground. Other then those couple of things nice job
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deusprogrammer In reply to AerithsSpirit [2008-06-29 09:51:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the comment Jenny. It means a lot coming from you ^.^ .
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deusprogrammer In reply to AerithsSpirit [2008-07-02 10:45:54 +0000 UTC]
When you get a chance, critique my new one. Its a character for a card game I'm making.
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AerithsSpirit In reply to deusprogrammer [2008-07-06 02:35:08 +0000 UTC]
Ok will do just let me know when its posted
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deusprogrammer In reply to AerithsSpirit [2008-07-06 06:53:44 +0000 UTC]
It's posted . Its the Script Kitty Character. I asked my friend Panamatt, once again it's the legs that appear to be my big problem.
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