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Description Incensed and livid, he discharges a string of angry words into the air. My arms are flailing around, as if to impede those words from hurtling at me. But still, they form an entrance into my ears. I can see the veins on his neck protruding. What happened? I'm not quite sure of the answer. We were just talking about something but eventually our discussion became aggressive when we had yet another disagreement. We seldom blithely agree on something. See what a merry couple we are?

As I try reasoning with him, he whirls round with his fists balled up in his ebony hair as he takes a few steps forward, letting out an aggravated sigh which gradually grows louder as he spins round again, facing me. Through his gritted teeth, he snarls, "I have had enough!" Klein swings the bedroom door open and strides out, raging me even more. Agitated, I holler vociferously at his retreating back, "Where the hell are you going? Don't walk out on me when I'm talking to you!" Klein deliberately disregards me as he exits our condo, slamming the door loudly, making sure that the sound is obtrusive to my ears. I bolt toward our bed and lay crumpled on it.

Infuriated, I grab a pillow, my fingernails digging into it and conceal my face into that pillow. "Good riddance," I mumble. I breathe in deeply, absorbing the smell of the pillow. It smells exactly like Klein's hair, the fragrance of his shampoo. The thought of him suddenly appears in my mind, lingering around. My thoughts are breached by a bark. I move the pillow away from my face and sit upright. Dale, our Dalmatian dog, stares at me with concern glinting in his eyes. I extend my arms and instantly, he dashes into my hug. We lie on the bed together as I rub his belly and glower at the ceiling. My blather on our recent spat turns out to be my lullaby for the night.

My eyes flutter upwards as something comfortingly warm brushes on my cheeks. Klein's ravishing looks come into view.Β Β One of the ends of that perfectly shaped pink lips of his curve slightly upwards, forming an adorable lopsided smile. For a while, we stare intently into each other's eyes.

"You came back," I say, breaching the wall of silence between us.

"Have I ever not?" He beckons me to come closer and so I snuggle up to him with his protective arms around me.

I smile. It's always like this. We fight, he leaves, he returns, we make up and the cycle continues. We're like oppositely-charged ions, Klein and I. We are pretty much the antonyms of each other yet we can't help but to be attracted to each other. We may appear as a mismatched couple but you know what they say, looks can be deceiving. Sometimes, Klein would be Mr. Wrong but when it's high time for him to switch back to Mr. Right, he would.

I love that trait of his. It keeps our relationship intriguing.
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Comments: 44

raspil [2011-03-03 20:13:25 +0000 UTC]

An interesting take on this prompt. Part of me likes the quickness of it but another part wishes there were more examples of how they are "right" and "wrong" for each other. I might have to subconsciously steal this idea from you ...

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deviantesse94 In reply to raspil [2011-03-05 15:10:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment!

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kinggiggolo [2010-11-22 03:00:57 +0000 UTC]

who's klein?

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-11-22 05:27:13 +0000 UTC]

The protagonists's husband C;

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-11-22 14:32:04 +0000 UTC]

darn it i really want a gilfriend T_T

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-11-23 05:03:42 +0000 UTC]

You'll get one when you get one. LOL

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-11-23 06:34:50 +0000 UTC]

i guess so....here something for you..[link]

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-11-23 07:07:25 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-11-23 07:21:20 +0000 UTC]

hahaha..by the way did you watch harry potter and the deathly hallows part 1?

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-11-23 11:14:07 +0000 UTC]

Read the book and watched the movie C:

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-11-23 11:18:33 +0000 UTC]

yeah but the ending was like wtf it just ended with a wand

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-11-23 12:40:17 +0000 UTC]

Cliffhanger ending because there's a second part.

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-11-24 06:08:51 +0000 UTC]

i watched the movie at a 4d theatre...it was epic... u use 3d glasses and the screen was like a giant hd lcd tv with an awesome stereo system..the best part was the seats moves..now thats 4d

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-11-24 08:58:28 +0000 UTC]

Sounds really fun

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-11-26 06:17:19 +0000 UTC]

it was..brunei is a really cool country.....its like paradise....wish you could be here

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-11-27 14:04:53 +0000 UTC]

I want to travel around Malaysia first. Then I'll fly somewhere else.

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-11-27 16:39:24 +0000 UTC]

brunei is closer....a bus trip can get you there in 15 hours 8 if u use a car...this place is honestly awesome...people here are rich beyond believe my brother's friends house is huge ...its like a palace...can you believe its a four floor house?!! THE LENGTH IS ALMOST HALF A KILOMETRE.He also has a friend whos an otaku(this guy has 4 shelfloads of animes) and in brunei you get paid 10$ Brunei every night during puasa for going to the palace thats 300$ = 800 rm in a month and you get free food in the palace......brunei also has jerudong park...the arcades were reconstructed....(the simulations are realistic) how rich is brunei you ask....in the 1980's the sultan hired Micheal Jackson too perform here....he's worth millions of dollars to hire and in the 1990's the sultan of brunei was one of the 10 richest person on earth....why brunei is awesome is because.....the houses are huge.......people are equally rich....going overseas wont impress people here...its like a past time to them and brunei is not crowded like malaysia....the lands are huge...i live in a water village and the view of the sea is amazing at night....brunei is also very beautiful because the forests are still everywhere.....its a very green country....i still climb the hills i use too climb as a kid(two hour walk)...the appeal of brunei in simple terms is amazing landscape...great food(really great)the stores have food and stuff not sold in malaysia....and the crime rate is extremely low....no traffic(rarely has traffic) the point is.....when you decide too travel the world when your older....put brunei in your mind map

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-11-28 05:16:02 +0000 UTC]

Sure, sure. But like I said, I want to travel around Malaysia first. I don't want to travel around other countries without traveling in my own country first. What if people ask me about Malaysia? I should have good answers set in my mind first C:

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-11-28 13:44:33 +0000 UTC]

YEAH BUT..YOU LIVE I SARAWAK...SO JUST TELL THEM ABOUT SARAWAK...ITS STILL A PART OF MALAYSIA

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-11-29 03:06:05 +0000 UTC]

I don't even know everything about Sarawak.

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-11-29 05:23:27 +0000 UTC]

kuching or if you dont know everything about kuching...try petrajaya.if you still dont know try naming our village or housing area....if not your street..f still no your address....if you fail too know this...congratulations your dumber than plants

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-11-29 06:09:11 +0000 UTC]

:\ OFC they wouldn't be interested in that kinda stuff.

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-11-30 16:22:37 +0000 UTC]

well you should answer anyway im off too places all the time....going to kota kinabalu on thursday...im using a boat

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-12-01 06:23:23 +0000 UTC]

Cool C:

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-12-03 09:25:13 +0000 UTC]

hahaha.....kk was cool i met my old classmate here.....she use to be very ugly during primary school but she's gorgeous now...i took some pictures with her and we watch a movie together in 3d

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-12-03 10:43:24 +0000 UTC]

Puberty. The stuff it does to people xD

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-12-04 10:27:32 +0000 UTC]

this place is awesome i played paintball in the forest, i also tried archery, sniping, fencing, and bowling it was awesome...

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-12-04 16:28:30 +0000 UTC]

Cool You tried a lotta stuff you've never tried before. You must be enjoying your holidays C:

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-12-05 10:33:58 +0000 UTC]

yes i suck at all of them..paintball was awesoe though and archery was cooler..the best one was probably fencing...which was awesome

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-12-06 07:49:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh, OK. I see C:

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-12-06 12:42:52 +0000 UTC]

you and i should play paintball sometime...i will cia you, but paintball hurts like hell....so be careful

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-12-07 16:53:13 +0000 UTC]

Sure LOL as long as you treat me xD

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-12-08 02:52:39 +0000 UTC]

do you know any paintball arenas in sarawak

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-12-08 08:52:17 +0000 UTC]

Nope. LOL

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-12-08 13:52:11 +0000 UTC]

too bad : P
btw.....what do you think of my classmate

[link] (here's her pic)

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-12-09 04:31:00 +0000 UTC]

Why, she's gorgeous *A*

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-12-09 05:44:13 +0000 UTC]

she was my classmate when i was in primary school in brunei but she's a year older(she's 17 now)

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-12-11 06:59:50 +0000 UTC]

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-12-11 07:41:44 +0000 UTC]

what's the emoticon suppose to mean?

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deviantesse94 In reply to kinggiggolo [2010-12-12 07:11:05 +0000 UTC]

Like, "I see".

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kinggiggolo In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-12-12 07:37:58 +0000 UTC]

i seen it

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story-of-kim [2010-11-21 17:24:22 +0000 UTC]

i am envy with you ! *3*/

if i hand this to my Eng teacher, she would like OH GOSH PEOPLE LOOK AT THIS ESSAY GO COPY THIS BLAHBLAHBLAH

-gives a round of applause-
i have to check on dictionaries like hell when reading your short stories <333
instant fave desu !

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deviantesse94 In reply to story-of-kim [2010-11-22 05:27:03 +0000 UTC]

LOL Thanks for the fave and the comment xD Don't be so sure about tht though. There are millions out there who are much better than me

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story-of-kim In reply to deviantesse94 [2010-11-22 11:30:53 +0000 UTC]

x) no biggie 8D β™₯
but aww, at least you motivate me |D
much2 appreciated <33

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