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Published: 2006-10-21 04:32:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 158; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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Too much, too fast.Waterfall, under the flow,
Stretched on the rocks.
No surface, no sunshine,
Nothing to look forward to.
The overcast sky steals my joy.
I miss the rainbows.
The sorrow stretches for eternity,
And the waterfall keeps flowing,
Flowing like the tears.
It was you. It was always you.
Everything was all your fault;
Why did you have to be so perfect?
I fell. Long and hard.
Now, I’m stranded on the rocks,
In the middle of the waterfall,
Everything falling down around me;
I can’t control a thing.
And as usual, it is all your fault.
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Comments: 2
jerzchick16 [2006-10-21 15:50:20 +0000 UTC]
i love this poem. i love how it sort of changed from your original thought but then you were able to recapture it all together and make it work perfectly. i love the train of thought within this piece a lot. this poem is beautiful, especially since its a comparison of something so simple, but done so exquisitely
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devilhooker666 In reply to jerzchick16 [2006-10-22 02:13:55 +0000 UTC]
^^ <3 Thanks. That was basically the exact comment I wanted. I love this poem.
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