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Published: 2007-01-05 02:45:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 180; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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When I leave,I’ll try to convince myself it was for my own good.
I’ll try to prove that I needed to be away,
That this is how it was supposed to be.
When I leave,
You’ll know the absolute truth;
That all I really wanted was for you to hurt.
I wanted you to cry to yourself over your loss.
When I leave,
There will be no coming back;
We both know this, and yet you try.
But your broken heart won’t fix a thing.
When I leave,
We’ll see how much we really meant to each other.
I like to think we meant a lot,
But in a short time we’ll both understand.
When I leave,
It’ll be a long walk.
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Comments: 6
thegirlinadarkprison [2007-01-12 17:49:45 +0000 UTC]
this is really good. i am diein to write but nothing wants to come out no more.
i can really relate to this. well done..really nice piece of work here.
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devilhooker666 In reply to thegirlinadarkprison [2007-01-13 00:56:38 +0000 UTC]
thanks!
how have you been? i haven't talked to you in so long.
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thegirlinadarkprison In reply to devilhooker666 [2007-01-13 22:40:07 +0000 UTC]
yeah no i am fine thank you.
how are you? yeah it has been awhile.
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devilhooker666 In reply to thegirlinadarkprison [2007-01-14 04:45:56 +0000 UTC]
i'm pretty good. been better, but can't complain much.
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jerzchick16 [2007-01-05 21:57:01 +0000 UTC]
it's strange to think of how horrible this sounds after last night....
the ending is the best part. you started off seeming focused on yourself, but by the end, it was within a whole, not sure i can explain.
havent seen writing from you in a long time, so i'm glad you're still at it. <3
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devilhooker666 In reply to jerzchick16 [2007-01-06 02:38:22 +0000 UTC]
thanks. and you know i still write, just sparingly.
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