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Published: 2004-01-04 11:48:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 167; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 27
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Description
Unable to feel anything...No emotion...
No feeling...
No comprehension
of any kind...
Just the constant pain
of a broken heart,
which hurts more than
any physical pain ever could...
Should be angry...
Should be upset...
Should feel something...
anything...
Other than this state of utter
denial & pain...
Blinding me from logic,
making me numb to all
other emotions...
Unsure of where to turn...
Every new direction brings another
reason to question...
Any every question
brings another reason
To just turn
and walk away...
Comments: 12
suspended-soul [2004-01-18 09:10:13 +0000 UTC]
This is really good... excellent show of emotion and im glad you just didn't turn and walk away!! thank fuck we sorted everything out!!
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devilishlycrazy In reply to suspended-soul [2004-01-18 09:41:42 +0000 UTC]
I reckon aye...don't worry I aint going anywhere I'd miss you too damn much!
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feli [2004-01-10 15:58:42 +0000 UTC]
Your poems always sounds so sad.. But sometimes I can still relate to them... Very expressive! Keep it up! ^^
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peppermint981 [2004-01-07 20:41:45 +0000 UTC]
this is really really good! I love your style, really brings out the emotion.
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Arkaizer [2004-01-05 03:34:29 +0000 UTC]
I like this. Good job. Tends to sway more my way of writing. Not exactly a poem but an expression of emotions.
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caramelevangel [2004-01-04 15:32:23 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I can relate to this sometimes. This isn't bad, I kinda like it. *I'm not exactly the one to read/write poems...but sometimes I succumb to " temptation" and read/write them *
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diabolicalfaerie [2004-01-04 12:40:43 +0000 UTC]
it's more like a rant, but still it's a good expression of your emotion...or well, lack of emotion...is it needless for me to say that i'm here for you? coz i think you know it
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meevilmonkey [2004-01-04 12:23:32 +0000 UTC]
and don't apollogise for anything, it's a good piece.
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damarikomu [2004-01-04 12:18:57 +0000 UTC]
Hey, no need to apologise. It still looks very nice. *smiles softly and gives you a big loving huggle*
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meevilmonkey [2004-01-04 12:17:41 +0000 UTC]
You can always turn to me hun
I'm here if you need, more than you know, you're a wonderful person and whoever made you feel like this should burn in hell
I mean... Yeah, you know where to find me, please talk to me
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