suspended-soul [2003-12-10 12:51:19 +0000 UTC]

Very good peice of writing!! I sereously think ur just getten better and better!! Anywayz if i hafta say this one more time ima fucken scream.... you need me for anything you know i'll be here 4 you!! And as you already know you can talk to me about anything...

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mech61 [2003-11-05 14:12:20 +0000 UTC]

I feel this way just about everyday I wake to face the day. I know what your feeling, not exactly but I have an idea. Im always here for you peita

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donniebrasco [2003-11-04 13:32:01 +0000 UTC]

sounds like a suicidenote
someone very lonely.


Steve

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school [2003-11-04 08:10:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow. just You touched me so much with this. I see what you're saying I'll try to check your work out more dear. I" m sorry. I just hope you try to live a long and healthy happy life. With me as your friend to try to help you or heal you or even be there for you when and if I can. I care about alot of people.

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deathjanissary [2003-11-02 22:18:17 +0000 UTC]

it hurts and i know

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caramelevangel [2003-11-02 15:42:00 +0000 UTC]

This is excellent! I've felt this way before. It's nothing new for me.

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ChaoticDreams [2003-11-02 14:39:44 +0000 UTC]

i definately know the feeling awesome job Im feelin that way right now

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capt-toenail [2003-11-02 12:18:23 +0000 UTC]

think im gonna cry
that's exactly how i feel

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halfway2nowhere [2003-11-02 11:37:54 +0000 UTC]

know the feelin'

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diabolicalfaerie [2003-11-02 11:30:01 +0000 UTC]

it's got a pretty good flow to it, except for one line that slightly breaks it, but not severely.
nice writing!

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