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Published: 2004-02-14 07:43:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 565; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 81
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How does one define love?Is it waking up every morning and knowing
you actually have something to get out of bed for?
Or is it when suddenly everything in the world
that once seemed beautiful, now looks dull
and lifeless compared to them...
Is it watching them walk out the door, and
missing them as soon as they do, even though
you know you'll see them again tomorrow?
Or is it reliving that last moment with them
over and over, till it almost seems to be
repeating itself before your eyes...
Is it when you start confusing your own ideas
with theirs, because the voice you hear
inside your head is no longer yours?
Or is it when everything you do, you do
for them, because they're the only thing that
keeps you going through each day...
Is it waking up each night crying because
you're so scared of having that one person
taken away from you forever?
Or is it knowing you'd give up everything you'd
ever worked towards, if that's what it would
take to make them happy...
Is it when no matter how angry or hurt you are
all you have to do is look at that person
and all that anger fades away to nothing...
Or is it knowing that the only reason you're still
here today, is because you couldn't bear to cause
that one person so much pain...
Comments: 20
gdpr-1218759 In reply to devilishlycrazy [2006-05-23 19:05:08 +0000 UTC]
hehe just looking through my favs again and found this... gosh it still means so much... I have to congratulate you again... Sums up everything in one. Heh i'll print it out or make it into a poster or something... just well done again, it so amazing how much everything is summed up... I would fav it again if I could heh
well done
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devilishlycrazy In reply to gdpr-1218759 [2006-05-24 06:49:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, it really means a lot to me.
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gdpr-1218759 In reply to devilishlycrazy [2006-05-24 12:20:51 +0000 UTC]
any time seriously the best sum up i've ever seen! deserves a dd!
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Daja [2004-03-26 16:49:14 +0000 UTC]
that is fantastic and um.... it is definetly the last reason a lot of the time, i guess that is selfish of me though....
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pemmy [2004-03-02 11:00:55 +0000 UTC]
wow...i never really like to read poetry...but i reread this about a million times...i adore it
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drunken-monkey [2004-02-27 08:59:02 +0000 UTC]
this just shows that love is actually defined as the ultimate. You captured what love is, the driver of all human action and emotion. It is what amkes us and created us. Love it
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chasingfuries [2004-02-26 14:25:34 +0000 UTC]
Very nice imagery and the emotion is described so beautifully. I love how consistent the meter and rhyme is...very good job.
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reynante [2004-02-20 10:19:09 +0000 UTC]
It's just that the world seems so beautiful when they're there.
Great great piece!
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ChaoticDreams [2004-02-15 01:51:56 +0000 UTC]
definately not crap its really good and well written
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damarikomu [2004-02-14 15:35:01 +0000 UTC]
Indeed, definitely not crap at all...
Love is that indescribable state of bliss when you're with your loved one.
*huggles*
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halfway2nowhere [2004-02-14 11:15:01 +0000 UTC]
hmm.....on second thoughts, i love it enough to it!
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devilishlycrazy In reply to halfway2nowhere [2004-02-14 11:19:25 +0000 UTC]
hehe thank you so much lez for you! I'm almost crying as i reread it...
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halfway2nowhere [2004-02-14 11:14:10 +0000 UTC]
dude this is awesome, definiatly not crap...i'z love it!!!!
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