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Published: 2003-09-16 11:55:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 82; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 13
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Description You don't remember the day it happened
You don't recall the time
Not a memory of this day you have
It's slipped right through your mind

To you this day means nothing
It was just an ordinary day
Yet something happened you never knew
Something I thought I'd never say

I still remember everything
Every feeling, word & look
I remember my vision blurring
And how my entire body shook

I never told you just how much
This day made me fall apart
Because what you never realised is
It was that day you broke my heart

Unkowingly you did it
It was just a twist of fate
But I have always been unable to shake
This lingering feeling of hate

I hated you for what you did
For what you made me feel
But the thing I hated most of all
Was that what you said was real

Your ripped my heart to pieces
Then stepped on every fallen shred
You unhooked everything I'd held onto
You made me wish that I was dead

I never let you see this
You never saw me cry
I told you things were A.O.K
You never heard the lie

You trusted what I told you
Like I had always trusted you
We told each other everything
But this was one thing you never knew

I've always wanted to tell you
But just couldn't ever say
Just couldn't say what was inside
That was hidden away that day

I want you to be proud of me
And to trust me the way I trust you
I want you to know that always
You're the thing that pulls me through

Yet what I need more than ever now
Is to have your arms around me to
I need to tell you that no matter what
I will always still love you...
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Comments: 8

musicobsessed [2003-09-21 18:51:33 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like there's a lot of meaning behind this poem. Very well-written.

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braceletsofsmoke [2003-09-21 12:07:03 +0000 UTC]

wow! this is *another* amazing poem...jeeze! i really envy the way you can just write your exact feelings down in such a great way. i had to read it twice, and thats when i noticed the ryhming...its so subtle, its really clever.

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KylieKeene [2003-09-17 09:56:14 +0000 UTC]

I hope everything works out for you =\

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halfway2nowhere [2003-09-17 06:20:51 +0000 UTC]

Holy shit this has a lot of emotion in it......wow! That's all i can say

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deathjanissary [2003-09-16 23:31:28 +0000 UTC]

very sad and very true

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mech61 [2003-09-16 22:51:41 +0000 UTC]

Amazing job! Im so glad I came over hear and looked at your work. You are a brilliant poet, and your words flow with such ease. The content is something I can totally identify with and you really make the person feel as if they are there. Keep up the great work!

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devilishlycrazy In reply to mech61 [2003-09-17 07:05:17 +0000 UTC]

omg thank you so much

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sweetlildevil [2003-09-16 21:52:57 +0000 UTC]

omfg this is how I felt with Robert! eh.. I have a better BF now and this one im not letting get away! lol wonderful poem

-Jenny

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