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Published: 2003-09-21 00:52:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 120; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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So many questions, where to start?So many answers, locked inside my heart
Bring them out, or hide them away?
Try to tell you the truth or lead you astray?
Tell me what to do, to set my mind at ease
Tell me how to say the things that make my heart cease
How do you tell someone everything thats inside?
How do you say all you want right now is to hide?
How do you tell them that they're everything & more?
How do you tell them that it's them that you adore?
How do you give something that will never be enough?
How do you shed that layer thats been whats kept you tough?
How do you explain why you do the things you do?
How do you explain that it's all because of you?
How do you tell yourself that you're in over your head?
How do you tell yourself that to them you may as well be dead?
How do you tell yourself that you're simply just too low?
How do you tell yourself what you'll never truly know?
These questions have no answers, they torture me inside
I no longer can remember just how many times I've cried
They tease me when I'm with you, ripping my head apart
They race through me uncaring, they're tearing at my heart
So many questions but the main one is why
Why must I continue living this lie?
On the outside I'm smiling, to you as happy as can be
But on the inside I'm dieing, and it's time for you to see...
Comments: 11
suspended-soul [2003-10-28 10:44:05 +0000 UTC]
Nice work... its got alot of emotion!! But dude plz talk to me more often about this kinda shit cos i hate seeing you down!! 'z and double
'z!!
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devilishlycrazy In reply to suspended-soul [2003-11-05 09:48:10 +0000 UTC]
On the outside I'm smiling, to you as happy as can be
But on the inside I'm dieing, and it's time for you to see...
need I say more???
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devilishlycrazy In reply to devilishlycrazy [2003-11-07 11:50:40 +0000 UTC]
I know, but that doesn't make it any easier...
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suspended-soul In reply to devilishlycrazy [2003-11-05 11:00:33 +0000 UTC]
owww peita you need to talk to me more!!! I know u know i'm here for you!
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sweetlildevil [2003-10-04 00:57:47 +0000 UTC]
Great job, I have seen part of the last 2 sentences as an icon. I still thinks it's wonderful though. Nice job!
-Jennifer
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braceletsofsmoke [2003-09-21 11:57:12 +0000 UTC]
this is an excelent poem. the way you just put everything out there has worked really well. i love the structure that you used. its a very good piece. well done
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deathjanissary [2003-09-21 06:24:32 +0000 UTC]
those bastards and bitches are shit then, not your bloody friends.
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mech61 [2003-09-21 05:33:04 +0000 UTC]
You have really laid your soul out in this poem, and it shows. Your an incredible poet and a good person too. Tell them how you feel and if they dont feel the same they dont deserve you
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MelancholyDaydream [2003-09-21 00:54:36 +0000 UTC]
i love it...it really reminds me of my earlier stuff....keep up the great work!
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