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Devinital — Shamari for Rinja

Published: 2012-12-28 04:29:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 982; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 3
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Description And here's the second design I promised Rinja: Kirijah's mommy Shamari. She's not based off any one design, just fairly typical lioness, so I kinda just experimented around with her colors. In the process, I came up with a fairly interesting story.
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Shamari is born into a small family pride in the Land of the Lawless. She is of no important lineage: her family having been rouges and with no memory of any royal or profound blood mingling into her line. But despite this, she is blessed with a unusually pale pelt and blue eyes: iconic to the long lost Spirit Pride. But her family feels little concern for this as they are humble folk, deciding to love her and give her the same treatment her siblings received. So Shamari grew up a happy and fairly normal childhood. As she grew older, she learned how to hunt both on her own and in a group as well as how to defend herself from rouge males and evade pride territories. By the time she was in her mid teens, she was ready to face the world; to go off on her own and find a mate and pride, to raise a family of her own. So off she sets, bidding goodbye to all she's known.
At first, everything is fine: its a bit lonely but her pride's training keep's her out of harms way. Months go by without incident till she is walking along the fringes of the Clifflands and the old Spirit Lands. The sound of laughter alerts her to hyenas and upon seeing a large clan on the horizon, flees before they see her. In her panic to get away, she becomes lost, wandering about aimlessly. A few days later find her starved and weak along with lost, so when the smell of a pride reaches her, she's quick to seek them out. However, the old cautionary tales from her parents leads her to approach them like she's approaching a skittish herd: down wind and out of sight.
Although she originally does this as to not scare or anger this new pride, it saves her from a fate worse then death.
Once close enough, she notices something peculiar: all the residents whether their male, female or cub all sport pale or near white coats and colors. They look some what reminecent of what her parents told her of the Spirit pride. Yet theirs nothing divine about them for the lions all look like an arrogant and beastly lot and the females look broken and solemn. In a startling realization, Shamari realizes that these males are keeping pale or near white lionesses hostage in hopes of breeding pure white offspring, abusing and torturing the lionesses till they break mentally.
So shocked by all this that she ends up blowing her cover, accidently tripping over a rock in her haste to leave. The lions see her and upon noticing the paleness of her pelt and blue of her eyes, there expressions become one of hunger, licking there lips at such a prime lioness having walked into their midst. The looks in their eyes are enough for Shamari as she rushes off at break neck speed: the fear of becoming another lioness in their harem pushing her to move at a speed she has never reached before now. But the days of little to eat or rest take their toll as her, her pursueers slowly begin to catch up to her. Finally realizing her fate, she turns to face them and fight, intent on dying instead of go with them. She fights with everything she has, clawing at them mercilessly and with a rage that is enough to scare off a few assalents. But she does eventually fall, she had no chance against multiple full grown lions, the exhastion and blood loss taking their toll. As she lays their, slowly falling into unconciousness, she does not realize the noise of their scuffle alerts the pride the land the had trespassed onto: The Black Rock Pride. As her assalents gloat over their victory, the young prince Seyidi and a band of his lionesses catch them off guard and quickly send them running. It is then that they notice the pale gray lioness lying in the grass.
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That's all I got: I'll leave the rest to Rinja to have fun with. Mind you, she can change any or all aspect of the story if she likes, or the design for that matter. I'm just decided to have fun with this.
So we all know she ends up with Seyidi but the question now is how that comes about. Is Seyidi a good lion or a bad one? Does he fall in love with her and she him or does he force himself upon her? Did she escape one fate only to stumble into another worse one?
LIke I said Rinja, that's for you to decide. Have fun .
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Comments: 25

Rinjapine [2012-12-28 17:12:36 +0000 UTC]

aha! shes a pretty one! 8D

and is this supposed to be Chanzo's pride who she runs into?

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Devinital In reply to Rinjapine [2012-12-28 17:43:42 +0000 UTC]

That she is.
And yes that's Chanzo's Pride. Sense the Riverlands are so close to the Clifflands I thought it be cool if Shamari ran into them. And it would explain how she ended up in the Riverlands.

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Rinjapine In reply to Devinital [2012-12-28 17:50:01 +0000 UTC]

hmm. ill have to change that, unfortunately. Chanzo's pride gets wiped out before this, so ill have to think of a different scenario

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Devinital In reply to Rinjapine [2013-04-09 03:42:51 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I came up with a better alternative. What if instead of Shamari running into Chanzo's pride, she ends up in the Hurricane Empire. Maybe she's on the fringes when she encounters some of the border guards. And upon noticing the paleness of her coat and her blue eyes they assume that she is white born or of White ancestry. Hoping to use her to upgrade their station and perhaps produce more "holy" offspring, they attempt to force her to become their mate, thus sending her running, right in the direction of the Black Rock Pride. And as the two prides hate each other (and so close boundry wise), it makes sense that she would be rescued and why they'd keep her.
Unless that doesn't work either but I'm cool either way.

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Rinjapine In reply to Devinital [2013-04-09 19:18:26 +0000 UTC]

that would work ^^

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Devinital In reply to Rinjapine [2013-04-09 22:43:38 +0000 UTC]

Sweet!

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Werebereus In reply to Rinjapine [2012-12-29 19:40:42 +0000 UTC]

how DO they get whipped out Rinja?

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Rinjapine In reply to Werebereus [2012-12-29 19:52:30 +0000 UTC]

ill get there
someday

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Werebereus In reply to Rinjapine [2012-12-29 20:20:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh, it's an important plot point? Maybe....The Hurricane Pride Dispatches it's Seige pride to wipe them out when Kingdoms start of accusing them (The Hurricane Empire) of stealing lionesses from their prides? Chanzo's Pride IS all pale, and maybe they hang out in the Land of the Lawless, which would be further proof since the Hurricane empire owns that land

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Rinjapine In reply to Werebereus [2012-12-29 20:22:52 +0000 UTC]

naw, its not that. i have their demise all planned out, and have for awhile.

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Werebereus In reply to Rinjapine [2012-12-29 20:31:27 +0000 UTC]

lol, is it border related? Do all the females gets killed or just the male *buzzing with questions*

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Rinjapine In reply to Werebereus [2012-12-29 20:33:14 +0000 UTC]

no, no border either ^^ and all the males mostly, and any females on their side. the subjugated and tormented females and cubs and stuff do not die. ^^

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CougarHearted In reply to Rinjapine [2012-12-29 20:47:32 +0000 UTC]

I remember a while back you saying to someone else that you were thinking about having the Wanderer Pride eradicate Chanzo's gang. But if that's not right, it will still be fun when we find out how Chanzo and those other evil pricks get their asses handed over to them!

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Rinjapine In reply to CougarHearted [2012-12-29 20:49:28 +0000 UTC]

lol where did i say that? i dont recall. and yes, thats still my intention XD

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CougarHearted In reply to Rinjapine [2012-12-29 20:54:44 +0000 UTC]

Ummm, it was from SOMONE'S bio who was affiliated with that pride. I'll have to check. XD

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Werebereus In reply to Rinjapine [2012-12-29 20:35:57 +0000 UTC]

Werebs can has a hint? *smiles sweetly*

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Rinjapine In reply to Werebereus [2012-12-29 20:39:41 +0000 UTC]

a hint? i dont know. i do need to keep SOME of my secrets XD

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Werebereus In reply to Rinjapine [2012-12-29 20:40:27 +0000 UTC]

True, true...

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Devinital In reply to Rinjapine [2012-12-28 19:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Alright, like I said, I just something up for the fun of it: ay and all changes are fine by me. But the whole "her being very pale and familiar to what the spirit pride looked like" could still be used. Let's face it, any one and every one in your lion universe wants the chance at a near white mate and the chance for white offspring.

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Rinjapine In reply to Devinital [2012-12-28 19:02:41 +0000 UTC]

yep. indeed so!

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CougarHearted [2012-12-28 14:20:07 +0000 UTC]

Everything about her design is so lovely. But YIKES! Was that Chanzo's hellhole pride that she ran into, there? O_O

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Devinital In reply to CougarHearted [2012-12-28 15:58:20 +0000 UTC]

Yes, stubbled upon them by accident. Thankfully, she was smart enough not to walk right into them and was close enough to the Riverlands to be able to escape safely.

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Kuot [2012-12-28 04:51:07 +0000 UTC]

She's pretty

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Devinital In reply to Kuot [2012-12-28 06:00:30 +0000 UTC]

Isn't she.

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Kuot In reply to Devinital [2012-12-28 06:02:38 +0000 UTC]

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