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Published: 2012-01-10 18:06:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 569; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 4
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Description mirror mirror on the wall
who's the fairest of them all?
must you count my every flaw
slash my heart and make it raw
mirror mirror on the wall
tell me please just what they saw
from my faith I start to fall
in this pain my heart does call
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Comments: 23

Rema-Alkhany [2013-10-16 06:06:11 +0000 UTC]

very nice

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HighLadyofKaos [2013-02-10 14:13:35 +0000 UTC]

A poetic way to express the horror I feel every morning when I look into my mirror. I like your twist to a classic - great work!

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devotedwritter93 In reply to HighLadyofKaos [2013-02-11 22:37:22 +0000 UTC]

same here, or at least I used to be the same. I hated to look in the mirror and see Now, I'm learning to appriciate and love the person I see looking back at me. Thank you for your kind words on my poem though

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ThousandMaster-Nagi [2012-02-15 19:36:07 +0000 UTC]

very nice! you have a way with words. I also like how you approached and modified this classical poem your own way

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Ililn [2012-01-30 00:33:16 +0000 UTC]

Very nice poem, it sends a powerful message (: well done!

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devotedwritter93 In reply to Ililn [2012-01-30 04:20:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks!!

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intricately-ordinary [2012-01-13 03:32:49 +0000 UTC]

haha you write like me! a common soul... beautiful

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devotedwritter93 In reply to intricately-ordinary [2012-01-13 04:33:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! (: I'll have to check out some of your writing!

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intricately-ordinary In reply to devotedwritter93 [2012-01-13 05:06:59 +0000 UTC]

oh sorry I didn't mean to like dually compliment you and myself lol... I just meant i love your poem

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devotedwritter93 In reply to intricately-ordinary [2012-01-13 16:43:40 +0000 UTC]

haha it's all good! I do appreciate it!

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YouAreMore1 [2012-01-12 19:22:03 +0000 UTC]

LOVE IT

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devotedwritter93 In reply to YouAreMore1 [2012-01-12 23:20:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks guys!!! (:

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YouAreMore1 In reply to devotedwritter93 [2012-01-13 01:47:50 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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meadowcloud [2012-01-12 17:33:55 +0000 UTC]

~13lackPoetry: don't be an ass.
I also agree that this is an interesting spin-off of a classic idea I like the rhyming and meter, it flows nicely

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ScarletDevil1503 [2012-01-12 17:16:31 +0000 UTC]

~13lackPoetry is a troll.

I, however, think that this spinoff of a classic quote is quite nicely done. Keep on writing!

-Scarlet

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devotedwritter93 In reply to ScarletDevil1503 [2012-01-12 17:20:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! (:

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13lackPoetry [2012-01-12 17:06:43 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Really original. This poem just blowed me away!

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Finnegal In reply to 13lackPoetry [2012-01-13 00:08:47 +0000 UTC]

*blew

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13lackPoetry In reply to Finnegal [2012-01-13 12:46:33 +0000 UTC]

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Finnegal In reply to 13lackPoetry [2012-01-13 14:35:21 +0000 UTC]

lolnope~! 8D

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13lackPoetry In reply to Finnegal [2012-01-15 14:27:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm a baby!!

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devotedwritter93 In reply to 13lackPoetry [2012-01-12 17:08:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! (:

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13lackPoetry In reply to devotedwritter93 [2012-01-12 17:09:08 +0000 UTC]

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