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Pretty bad logo. I just couldn't figure out what the symbol should represent. In my mind it looks more like a pacman with a Hitler haircut eating a dot.
I had to read your explanation β as someone before me was also confused by it β in order to figure out what it was supposed to be.
I think one fatal mistake you made is that you're using an abstract version of the shark's head while its fin is most characteristic of a shark. Leave the fin out and I rather see a fish in the symbol now.
There's nothing wrong with that as the name of the brand is 'efish', but then I wonder why you think it's appropriate to show a shark.
Another mistake you made is using a casual handwriting for the name while the symbol is so geometrical. If the type were also geometrical I think the chances of people immediately seeing a fish/shark instead of a pacman will also increase.
But why does the shark's tail have to cut a part of 'e' away anyway? That's not what an 'e' looks like. I think it's clever to use a fish to create the white space in the 'e' though but the positive space should also have a form which makes sense, and that shape on the top left of the 'e' doesn't make sense stylistically. Why not use a smaller fish to create the eye of 'e'?
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That's not polite to say, and there's a lot of better ways to say the same.
And by the reason that you are still a "design starter" i can't give you the credit for what you said.
But anyway there's no reason for a controversy talk, i thank your opinion, but wasn't nice to read that.
And this was made just for fun, no enfort applied : )
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I don't believe I was impolite. A bit harsh in my criticism perhaps, but I have nothing personal against you or your work. I just stumbled upon this and the beautiful presentation aside, the logo itself was confusion and didn't make sense to me, so I pointed it out. Maybe you don't want to hear it, but that's not relevant to me. I took my time to explain why the logo isn't working and I noticed someone else thought it was confusing as well, so it's not just me.
And what do you mean by me being a "design starter"? I also find it strange that you give me no credit for what I said while I offered constructive criticism; it's not just a blatant opinion or pointless criticism.
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unusual creativity for DA comissions. good job.
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i dont understand the idea, could you please explain?
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The shark shape creates an "e" : )
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oh yes, i couldnt really spot the eye of the shark, that confused me
thanks for reply
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O logo Γ© sΓ³ para treinar ? Ou Γ© mesmo feito para uma empresa ?
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preciso de ajuda para perceber o logo...
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Aquele "bonequinho" (Γcone) se reparares Γ© um "e" (de e-fish), esse "e" Γ© constituΓdo pelo corpo de um peixe digamos que dobrado para cima em que a cauda fica por cima e a cara do peixe de lado : )
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hmm...percebi. Mas vou ser sincero, nΓ£o gostei mto. AlΓ©m que a tipografia escolhida nΓ£o se adapta Γ iconografia.
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Deixa la tem q se começar por algum lado : )
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