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Furyian [2014-11-05 00:43:25 +0000 UTC]
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I enjoy this image on a number of levels, the shadow play on the skin, the muscle tone and the figure - they all work together very well. The top portion where the collarbone becomes the sharp angle of the pectoral muscle is especially nice and makes for a very interesting plane for the eye to fall on. I like the small shadow on the shoulder and the ones falling on the hip. You've got a fantastic eye for how to position the torso, in this piece.
My only - small - critique is that I would have removed his necklace. It interrupts the piece, in that it brings the eye away from the skin. The focus is on the flesh, the shadow and how they play together. Like I said, this is a small detail that I would have changed. This is a fantastic image, either way!
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diddrick In reply to Furyian [2014-11-08 14:51:51 +0000 UTC]
I agree with the actual duration that the necklace just break the top of the image and can blow out a view of the texture of the skin.
Thank you for your constructive comments and criticisms.
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Furyian In reply to diddrick [2014-11-16 03:18:58 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for providing a safe atmosphere to give it. It's always good to know that critiques won't be seen as attacks.
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