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TALES OF AUTUMN SPRING (ToAS)

by Richard Mandel

based on characters and situations

copyright (C) 2019-2023, all rights reserved

Episode 1 - "Prelude"

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Nana, will you tell more stories ...? - There's my springboard for the rest of Brandy's tales I'm planning for ToAS.

I had to pare this final scene back from my original draft since I was already over on page count, per my original series standard of 20-odd pages per episode. In the original Brandy acquiesced and picked Jenny up, and they also had a bit more dialogue while going to the bathroom to wash their hands. The draft ended differently too, with Jenny asserting she could wash her own hands because she's "a big girl now" like before, with Brandy smiling and saying softly, "Not yet ... but you will be." Again I was already over on page count, so I cut things back to the simplified Waltons-esque ending you see above. It was also a lot easier to pose too. XD

That's it folks, save for the credits (a necessity). I hope you'll let me know your impressions and what you'd like to see in future ToAS tales. I'm always open to ideas so long as they don't include porn in any form. If you'd rather share your thoughts in confidence, Send a Note. Don't use Chat because I don't and I ignore all Chat requests. Send a Note. Thank you.

Until next time!

Description

TALES OF AUTUMN SPRING (ToAS)

by Richard Mandel

based on characters and situations

copyright (C) 2019-2023, all rights reserved

Episode 1 - "Prelude"

PREV --> FIRST --> NEXT -->

--------------------

COMMENTS

Nana, will you tell more stories ...? - There's my springboard for the rest of Brandy's tales I'm planning for ToAS.

I had to pare this final scene back from my original draft since I was already over on page count, per my original series standard of 20-odd pages per episode. In the original Brandy acquiesced and picked Jenny up, and they also had a bit more dialogue while going to the bathroom to wash their hands. The draft ended differently too, with Jenny asserting she could wash her own hands because she's "a big girl now" like before, with Brandy smiling and saying softly, "Not yet ... but you will be." Again I was already over on page count, so I cut things back to the simplified Waltons-esque ending you see above. It was also a lot easier to pose too. XD

That's it folks, save for the credits (a necessity). I hope you'll let me know your impressions and what you'd like to see in future ToAS tales. I'm always open to ideas so long as they don't include porn in any form. If you'd rather share your thoughts in confidence, Send a Note. Don't use Chat because I don't and I ignore all Chat requests. Send a Note. Thank you.

Until next time!