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A/N: Thought I'd write this one for Barry because he's so innocent and naïve (maybeeee...) and cuuuuuute. He doesn't belong to me... or does he? (Huehuehuehue.) Anyway, it's a short one that just popped into my head, because he'd definitely be caught in a situation like this. Will this author's note be longer than the fic? Gah, I don't even know. ;-;
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He'd just flown back from his training in the Hoenn league, and he couldn't wait to see her. All the Pokemon he'd seen and caught-- and what better way to tell her than by surprising her?
They'd talked and called numerous times, but it just wasn't the same as having her right there to talk to. He wondered what they'd do first-- she mentioned a new café in town.
Walking up to the door, he reached under one of her plants and pulled out the hidden key she'd left him a while ago. He quietly slipped in and closed the door softly behind him.
The house was cozy and familiar, filled with the smell of her. (Y/N)'s (Pokémon) bounced down the stairs, wary at first but perking up when it saw Barry's familiar face.
He grinned and waved, patting (Pokémon) and holding a finger to his lips to keep it quiet.
"I missed you too!" He whispered, "Now, show me where (Y/N) is."
It walked him over to the stairs as he made his way up and toward her room. He could hear her humming from inside, that same sweet voice that would always sing along on the radio with him.
Barry couldn't take it anymore, swinging open the door.
"SURPRISE! I'M HOM-- OH DEAR SWEET ARCEUS."
She turned around, standing in only a pair of underwear, her (H/C)-coloured hair draped down her neck, soaked from a shower.
Her innocent, curious expression instantly morphed, eyes going wide, jaw dropping, and both of her hands darting up to cover her chest.
"YOU CAN'T JUST BARGE INTO MY ROOM LIKE THAT HAVE YOU HEARD OF KNOCKING I SWEAR WHEN I GET DRESSED I WILL KILL YOU!"
A string of curse words followed shortly after as Barry groaned and stood up again.
He wiped the blood off of his nose, wondering if it came from (Y/N) slamming the door on his face or from what he'd just seen.
Slowly, a smirk appeared on his face.
Yeah, he'd definitely missed that.
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Comments: 51
Words-Of-Fate [2017-08-13 18:44:47 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha, that was just too cute. I've never read a Barry fic until stumbling across yours and you're really starting to get me into him xD
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dinosauruses In reply to Words-Of-Fate [2017-08-14 00:41:15 +0000 UTC]
LOL I totally forgot about this one omg! This is such an early one, I'm glad you liked it, haha! He's probably my second favourite character, after Blue/Green/Gary (the discussion we just had about this omg LOL)
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dinosauruses In reply to Warriorcatgrl99 [2016-08-01 02:24:48 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, he's so silly. Thank you! <3
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PokeWar [2016-07-15 00:26:06 +0000 UTC]
XD this is exactly how I Acted whenever my brother walked in on me when I was naked!Zorua why did you lead him up here?!?
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ToukoxNforlife In reply to PokeWar [2018-12-29 20:18:48 +0000 UTC]
*le gasp* YOU CHOSE ZORUA TOO?!
XD XP cx
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PokemonSilverFangirl In reply to ToukoxNforlife [2020-02-20 21:28:18 +0000 UTC]
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PokeWar In reply to dinosauruses [2016-07-15 06:29:41 +0000 UTC]
Awkward times in fiction and real life~Huff~
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dinosauruses In reply to Flukeycanine84 [2016-07-06 13:27:23 +0000 UTC]
Hahahahahahaha, what a perv, eh? c:
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SonyVel [2016-03-08 23:25:26 +0000 UTC]
"SURPRISE! I'M HOM-- OH DEAR SWEET ARCEUS." Now I am crying XD this is soooooo, just, ghaaa XD
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dinosauruses In reply to WooperYorokobi [2015-07-02 03:35:22 +0000 UTC]
Hehehehe, exactly! c:
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dinosauruses In reply to Starklovesrocknroll [2015-07-02 03:36:42 +0000 UTC]
Ahahaha, oh noooo! Hope it was at least from someone like Barry! D:
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Starklovesrocknroll In reply to dinosauruses [2015-07-29 13:28:09 +0000 UTC]
My girlfriend had been away in another city for like 3 days and she just barged into my house then my room and was like "HONEY IM HOOOOMMMMEEEE DID YA MISS ME-OH DEAR GOD I AM SO FUCKING SORRY!!!!!" And she left my room
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dinosauruses In reply to blood-and-angel-cake [2015-07-02 03:35:33 +0000 UTC]
Hehehehe, I know what you mean! c;
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dinosauruses In reply to laurasanya [2014-08-26 02:58:14 +0000 UTC]
Ooooooh, I definitely agree. c;
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pageoftime97 [2014-08-03 14:45:57 +0000 UTC]
gosh darnit barry, you seem to always get into some thing.
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dinosauruses In reply to pageoftime97 [2014-08-13 21:10:37 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha, he's such a character. x)
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dinosauruses In reply to DJthehedgehog1 [2014-08-13 21:10:25 +0000 UTC]
Hehehe, he seems so innocent but I'm not too sure he really is! o:
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IllusionsOfInsanity [2014-05-08 16:20:07 +0000 UTC]
Well, at least he didn't barge in and knock you over... That would have been worse.
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dinosauruses In reply to IllusionsOfInsanity [2014-05-08 22:46:36 +0000 UTC]
Hehehehe, much worse. So true. :'D
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IllusionsOfInsanity In reply to dinosauruses [2014-05-09 00:26:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank goodness he could contain his energy for once in his life. >: D
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dinosauruses In reply to BreezeTheEevee124 [2014-04-26 21:56:10 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, are you sure you want him to leave? C;
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CookieGirl133 In reply to dinosauruses [2014-05-04 16:30:17 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Is all I say. But it is a great story! :3
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Kwill350 [2014-04-22 05:49:38 +0000 UTC]
Me - BARRY GET OUT OF HERE!!!!
Barry - but I just got back are you happy to see me
Me - I WILL WHEN YOU GET OUT OF HERE!!!!
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dinosauruses In reply to Kwill350 [2014-04-23 00:10:43 +0000 UTC]
LUL, I know right? :'D
He's so adorably awkward. ><
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Kwill350 In reply to dinosauruses [2014-04-23 09:07:40 +0000 UTC]
Hahahaha true but still....Me - BARRY GET OUT OF HERE!!!!
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