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Published: 2005-10-24 18:03:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 230; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Find a place to hide in
No one to confide in
Sleep until you're nothing but dust
Until your heart has turned to rust.

Nothing to hurt or harm you
Your body trying to disarm you
Live a clockwork existance
Mind still fixed in a fake trance.
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Comments: 8

sumpe [2005-10-25 16:43:43 +0000 UTC]

I can tell you did this in a short amount of time

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disturbedchicken In reply to sumpe [2005-10-25 18:29:20 +0000 UTC]

oh shut up. mortal.

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sumpe In reply to disturbedchicken [2005-10-27 19:11:28 +0000 UTC]

no

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disturbedchicken In reply to sumpe [2005-10-29 13:09:46 +0000 UTC]

yes

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sumpe In reply to disturbedchicken [2005-10-29 18:43:05 +0000 UTC]

what

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disturbedchicken In reply to sumpe [2005-10-31 17:44:48 +0000 UTC]

whaaat?

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SaffyreNeko [2005-10-25 02:04:57 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of yet ANOTHER song...well actually a combination. It sounds like the song "Disarm" by an artist I can't remember the name of, and lyrics from Coldplay at the same time.
Critique? Sheez, you're pushin' me, but if I have to say it...aww, just look at my critique for your other poems. But sometimes short poems get the point across faster.

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disturbedchicken In reply to SaffyreNeko [2005-10-25 17:49:06 +0000 UTC]

o____O

I didn't have much inspiration so it had to be short.... lol

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