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Published: 2010-09-23 20:53:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 283; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Thank you to the fellow who posed for this. Background was photo referenced...kinda.I apologize for the low quality of the image. I don't have the best of rooms/lighting to take proper pictures of larger works. When I take a better quality image, I will upload it.
20"x30", Stonehenge paper, graphite and charcoal.
I hunger for feedback.
EDIT: Dubbed this version 1.0. V. 2.0 will be posted after I get the piece back and fixed.
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Comments: 8
I think its just the front foot looking a little flat and not quite on the ground right, but the back one looks pretty good. There is just something about that front one that throws me off, But once again, I don't blame you, feet are the devil.
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The perspective is probably wonky and the absence of shading on it? I do see where the ankle on the foreshortened one would be lowered to ground it a bit more.
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the feet are a little awkward, its like you were just trying to make people not look at them. I know how you feel, I hate feet. Looove the expression though. and the background is nice too.
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You found out my secret >_> Feet are horrid little things. I guess I didn't fix them enough.
Thank you for the feedback <3
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I really like the value in this piece, the background is magnificent. The only real thing I would point out as far as critique goes is the arm on the far side looking a little odd. Other than that nice work! 10 points to Gryffindor. (The Cymbal monkey was a nice touch as well)
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Hah, I'm doing my job in the House!
As for the arm, how's it looking a little odd? I see the shading, and potentially the anatomy.
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Not so much the shading, but the joint seems to dip a little too low on the arm.
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Ah-hah, excellent eye for catching that. When I get the piece back that'll definitely be fixed.
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