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Published: 2005-02-20 10:58:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 472; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 24
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You met me.You liked me,
You told me.
You said to me
"You could be.
You might be."
You left me.
You deserted me.
You hurt me.
You lost me.
You're gone.
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Comments: 10
Ok i guess if i write " i know the feeling ", yer gonna think yea, you've watched others comments..
But i guess every 'normal' person should recognise that feeling, every person knows what it's about and how you might have felt/ feel.
I keep on trying and trying and every time I try, something has to be going wrong..
By the way 
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Ah, I know that feeling. Women tend to be that way, and it really does suck when it happens. I like this, a lot.
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Yeah... and don't think that if it happens, you've had it... no, it'll happen again. And again maybe.
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hmm the idea is good, but i found it somewhat cliche. I was already apprehensive when i read the so very overused title "You". I thought it had quality, but a little too real and factual for poetry, i found it lacking in spirit. Pretty good though.
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ahhh, I know that feeling... sucks... I like this... short and to the point... a definite fav
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it's so sweet!, ok actually it's not, but the way you wrote it is so sweet.... i know the feeling...
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