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this image didn't come out as I wished, anyway was done...UPdate: i reworked the file
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greatwhiteshark1993 [2023-08-08 19:13:40 +0000 UTC]
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Mitia-Arcturus [2011-05-25 06:59:13 +0000 UTC]
Dear dleoblack
Your Wonderful art work ... is selected to get in...Action-Portraits
If you agree...!!!
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lokkenShadow [2011-05-19 13:27:49 +0000 UTC]
Wow !
That's just amazing. This kind of painting make me wanna to painting right now ...
You are a great !
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Char-coal [2011-05-18 22:42:14 +0000 UTC]
So beautiful. I love the emotion and impact of the colours!
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dleoblack In reply to nahual4004 [2011-05-19 07:06:46 +0000 UTC]
I already did some changes in this one respect the previous version
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Rommiesart [2011-05-18 13:06:26 +0000 UTC]
Amazing work! The details and colors look awesome!
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Jilliart [2011-05-17 05:40:28 +0000 UTC]
didn't come out as you wished? But Damn, this is awesome, how could it be any better?
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dleoblack In reply to Jilliart [2011-05-17 08:52:58 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! If I can I'll rework...
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WindWalker94 In reply to dleoblack [2011-05-17 11:45:13 +0000 UTC]
this picture is so epic so that i came.
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pfors [2011-05-16 18:57:45 +0000 UTC]
All the elements look very good in themselves, but the composition as a whole isn't terribly interesting. There doesn't seem to be much interaction between the characters and the overall impression is a bit uniform outside of the focal point.
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dleoblack In reply to pfors [2011-05-17 07:08:12 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the crit, maybe it's why I'm not satisfied with it...suggestions to improve the image?
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pfors In reply to dleoblack [2011-05-17 17:08:25 +0000 UTC]
I think the main problem with the interaction between the characters is in the pose of the guy with the axe in relation to the one in the air. He's obviously the most pressing threat, but seems to be completely ignored. You could either change it by having axe guy parrying him, or take out flying guy altogether. I'm actually for the second option, it's both easier and gives the image some empty space and a strong bright diagonal in the image. I also think it would help the viewer in following axeguy's gaze and the diagonal formed by shoulder-arm-cloak-enemy sword to the minor focus.
Just my . (I'm hardly an expert on composition and much too lazy to implement it in my own work
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Cccsteam [2011-05-16 18:42:43 +0000 UTC]
this....THIS.....IS AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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