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UPDATE (03/25/18): Fixed the watermark to include the proper name of the fan fic in preparation for the art archive.Second commission for , based on his MLaaTR fan fic called 'My Life as a Teenaged Von Neumann Device'.
Jenny (in XJ-10 form) and Misty are charging towards the insane hybrid of Brit Crust and Vexus, who is powered by the mysterious pip crystals (seen in the MLaaTR season 1 episode 'Dressed to Kill').
I tried out some shading and lighting techniques I hadn't used in my earlier work. Hope you like it.
XJ-10's design is largely based on 's work (his XJ-10 pic was the first fan pic I saw of that particular model), mainly this piece here:
odaleex.deviantart.com/art/XJ-β¦
I believe he based his on those blueprints we saw in the MLaaTR Christmas Special. So, the XJ-10 you see here is a mix of his design, the official XJ-10 design and my design.
*** NOTE THAT THESE ORDERS WERE PLACED LAST YEAR, I DO NOT TAKE NEW COMMISSIONS RIGHT NOW ***
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claycorn [2023-12-21 02:01:06 +0000 UTC]
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danTheBeginner [2021-10-31 19:25:42 +0000 UTC]
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Meowingtons-Hax [2019-05-12 21:26:37 +0000 UTC]
So I just finished reading the story, and...what happened to this guy, anyway? I searched him all and I found were dead accounts and a deactivated dA account.
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DLToon In reply to Meowingtons-Hax [2019-05-13 10:24:05 +0000 UTC]
He got banned from dA for posting one of the commissions I did for him in 2011, which was NSFW. As for his other accounts being dead, are they still at least operational where you can access the old stories he wrote? If not, and he's actively closed them, then that's a new development I am not aware of. I do know that he's since moved on to other things but I was also under the impression that he was still keeping his old stuff available online.
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Meowingtons-Hax In reply to DLToon [2019-05-13 19:40:38 +0000 UTC]
Well, searching up "Toonspew" on Google yields results from accounts of the same name on a bunch of different adult websites, all of which haven't been touched in a looong time. Most of them don't even have content on them either, except one which is MLaaTVND, but that one's only up to chapter 19. If you do search up the fanfic specifically though the whole thing does come up on Fanfiction.net by some dude under the name of "Solomon-Grundy". Dunno if this is the same person or not but he was active up until 2015. As for anything else he may have written, that probably either is gone or you'd have to do some serious digging.
Shame to hear he's actually moved on from this, though. From some character line-up thing that was also commissioned from you and I also managed to find, he did say he was thinking of writing a sequel. I would've definitely read it. But it's understandable, the fanfic is like, what, more than 10 years old already?
If you're able to disclose this, I'm curious as to what kind of things he's up to nowadays. Does he go under a new alias now or is just not online anymore?
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DLToon In reply to Meowingtons-Hax [2019-05-13 21:29:38 +0000 UTC]
I got in touch with him and he stated that the FanFiction.net version of the story is the most up-to-date and complete one (he didn't verify whether or not it actually goes only for 19 chapters or not; I did send him a follow-up email asking for clarification). He also told me to relay you that he's pretty much tied up with IRL stuff but he does post on Infinitychan's /co/ board, where it's usually about his Ghoul School -related project updates.
I do have a little bit of knowledge concerning the sequel but I'd rather not risk telling you unless you've either read the first fic or don't care about spoilers (because the set-up for the sequel obviously lies in how the original story ends).
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Meowingtons-Hax In reply to DLToon [2019-05-14 21:01:52 +0000 UTC]
Nice to hear he's still around. Has he written anything else besides this?
Also, yeah I've already read it, so please do tell me the details. Although with this...are you implying that the sequel could still happen?
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DLToon In reply to Meowingtons-Hax [2019-05-14 22:12:38 +0000 UTC]
AFAIK, he's done some other stories, though out of them I'm only really familiar with a short Arnold/Rhonda lemon based on Hey Arnold!.
The sequel was going to deal with Jenny's daughter June essentially taking her place as the superhero robot, and Brad and Tiff having outerspace adventures, with June sometimes accompanying them.
The sequel's not gonna happen, unfortunately, as TS has moved on from it. I recall (and emphasis on this being based on my memories and not something he said in the recent email to me) the biggest problem he had, besides gradually losing interest to it, was that he probably had trouble coming up with a good villain for them. Makes sense, considering that Vexus and Brit are both dead and they were not going to come back in any form, and Vexus especially was the "biggest bad" of the original show, so anyone else than her would instantly be considered a less-important and less-exciting villain.
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Meowingtons-Hax In reply to DLToon [2019-05-15 02:23:18 +0000 UTC]
I just now realize that the "Solomon-Grundy" FanFiction.net account I mentioned earlier has the Ghoul Girls story and that Hey Arnold! story, so I guess it is Toonspew. I assume though that his latest project "Ghoul Girls Gone Wild" hasn't been updated since 2015 and is only on chapter 4 due to thoseΒ aforementioned IRL problems.
Anyway, yeah, all that is understandable. The "losing interest" part is one of the things I first thought. And he would've probably had to create an entirely new villain in order to have that sameΒ perilous effect Vexus and Brit had, all the while not making it seem too forced. All these things combined with whatever else was happening atm leading to the end of a potential sequel. Oh well, tell him I said I wish him good luck on whatever he's planning to do now
Although...I do have one final question, and it's a pretty heavy one. Would he allow it if someone else were to, let's say, create an "unofficial official" sequel to this fanfic on their own? I'm not saying anyone will or will not do this (definitely not now, anyway), but I like to keep my options open...should I indulge in any of the random ideas I've accumulated over the years.
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DLToon In reply to Meowingtons-Hax [2019-05-15 11:48:19 +0000 UTC]
Sounds like it could be him, then, although he didn't take note when I asked him about that.
I'm sure he'd appreciate your kind words
You're right about that one being somewhat loaded. I can't really answer it for him, either, unless I contact him again and ask about it (which I can certainly do). However, a general advice that I can give you is that it's always a good idea to ask permission first and if given the 'OK', then see if there are any guidelines you should follow to be respectful. For instance, I'm not happy when someone edits my art without my permission and posts it online making no distinction that it's an edited version of something I've drawn, but I'm more than happy to give permission to such things if the person creating the edit adds their signature there and mentions it's an edit.
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Meowingtons-Hax In reply to DLToon [2019-05-16 20:24:28 +0000 UTC]
Duly noted. Main reason I asked is cause', well, I'm fairly ambitious when it comes to random possible projects that I want to do. It most likely won't happen in a year, hell probably even two years, or not at all is entirely possible too since this is probably just me talking a lot of stuff since I just read the fanfic. But if within the next five years or so you get word of some rando creating a sequel, don't be surprised I don't easily forget things, either.
Well in that case, what's the best place someone can contact him should any particular person attempt to do this kinda thing?
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DLToon In reply to Meowingtons-Hax [2019-05-20 06:35:16 +0000 UTC]
He recently got back to me and he says he's OK with this. He also gave me an email address that you can use to contact him, although I'm not gonna disclose it here in the public. Shoot me up with a private message and I'll tell it to you there.
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DLToon In reply to Austin7613 [2018-05-01 14:47:51 +0000 UTC]
Kinda starts off as a really good regular lemon, then everything goes horribly wrong, and it switches into being an epic confrontation between Jenny and Vexus with sex scenes here and there (although it's rather clear that the pornographic aspects of the fic take a back seat as the thing progresses). Oh, and Brit starts going mentally insane. Then more shit happens, and it's difficult to discuss without spoiling things (although I guess you're already spoiled because this drawing depicts a dramatic scene during, well, the final confrontation between Jenny, Brit and Vexus). There are character deaths in it and lots of things that happen that have irreversible consequences, but it's written pretty good... or at least that's what I thought back in the day. I know that the author has moved on from it many years ago and has other projects going on, and I honestly don't know if either one of us considered it still holding up today, but I generally hold in very high regard when it comes to telling stories.
Alas, I can't link to it here because dA doesn't allow outgoing URLs to NSFW content.
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Austin7613 In reply to DLToon [2018-05-01 14:55:13 +0000 UTC]
well shit.Β sounds like something worth reading and at the same time something i would not recommend if you want your childhood in tact.
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DLToon In reply to Austin7613 [2018-05-01 15:07:08 +0000 UTC]
That's actually a good summary of it.
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KennethV2000 [2017-08-20 15:49:37 +0000 UTC]
"Alternate realities Salavage your friends" starts playing. :3
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RCSS1998 [2016-09-23 12:31:51 +0000 UTC]
This confrontation should really have a theme song.
youtu.be/cXeb9cb6k0I
OP 16 Naruto Shippuden
Naruto and Sasuke = XJ9 and Misty
Together fighting the boss for the last time.
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AskTheGreySkull [2015-06-02 20:10:24 +0000 UTC]
How that happened? Brit is just stupid hag who think she's better.
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CRMartin1992 [2015-04-28 06:59:31 +0000 UTC]
Very nice, indeed, just like the fan fic itself. And 'Dressed to Kill' was from season one, not season two.
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rockycdi [2014-10-07 12:05:17 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeahh.... when jenny and sheldon were inside Sheldon's mind to find Silver Shell A.I then suddenly Sheldon proposed to Jenny and Jenny's answer was "Yes, Sheldon Lee, I will marry you!" then they did another romance.....ACTUALLY...BROKE...MY.. HEART....I mean Jenny was my childhood crush but since I realize it's just a show, I decided Brad would be the guy who Jenny will end up with...JxB Forveee..
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TFMUGENneedstohappen In reply to rockycdi [2015-01-18 08:31:19 +0000 UTC]
Oh I feel your pain, Jenny was my crush too. I love the story but once it got to the sexual assault scene, I was ready to flip a table with how horrifying it was.
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rockycdi In reply to TFMUGENneedstohappen [2015-01-20 06:20:16 +0000 UTC]
Fucking horrible indeed.
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TFMUGENneedstohappen In reply to rockycdi [2015-01-20 07:35:05 +0000 UTC]
Thankfully Vexus tore those assholes apart.
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rockycdi In reply to TFMUGENneedstohappen [2015-01-20 23:44:29 +0000 UTC]
Yeah..wait.. she did??
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TFMUGENneedstohappen In reply to rockycdi [2015-01-21 03:54:04 +0000 UTC]
How far did you read into the story?
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rockycdi In reply to TFMUGENneedstohappen [2015-01-21 11:08:16 +0000 UTC]
When Jenny and Sheldon had sex at his own mind fighting the Silver Shell O.S.
Jenny and Sheldon scenes really sickens me, honestly. I couldn't take shit no more. Dunno why?
I did enjoy the J/B moments but I hate the way they became a couple. Their relationship was conditional like...business or idk...
friends with benefits perhaps?? anyway I hated it!!
But I must say I was quite impressed with the fight scenes.
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TFMUGENneedstohappen In reply to rockycdi [2015-01-21 11:14:37 +0000 UTC]
I prefer JenXBrad to JenXSheldon myself and I will agree with you on the fight scenes. My favorite fight scene was when Brad burst in to save Jenny in a G1 Megatron costume.
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rockycdi In reply to TFMUGENneedstohappen [2015-01-24 01:23:44 +0000 UTC]
Hey I saw a pic where Brad acquired the power of the pip crystals.
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TFMUGENneedstohappen In reply to rockycdi [2015-01-24 02:02:50 +0000 UTC]
I saw that too, I remember that moment.
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rockycdi In reply to TFMUGENneedstohappen [2015-01-25 12:36:00 +0000 UTC]
He's pretty cool as he always is.
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TFMUGENneedstohappen In reply to rockycdi [2015-01-25 13:19:05 +0000 UTC]
Brad is cool and to me he is a better fit for Jenny than Sheldon is.
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rockycdi [2014-10-07 09:18:02 +0000 UTC]
This fan fic was EPIC...not to mention that my childhood crush Jenny was fucked several times. All the moaning,the orgasm,the cums,the raping and all that shit made me wish that I never should've read the fic especially that TOONSPEW was a Jenny x Sheldon shipper.
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rockycdi [2014-10-07 09:04:42 +0000 UTC]
Well, we did get a glimpse of XJ-10's blueprint on the actual show (ep. A robot for all season's) but then again the show was suddenly cancelled. Β Damn you Renzetti!
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J-Knight2008 [2014-06-20 15:24:43 +0000 UTC]
is you're version of xj-10 is an upgrade or a oc?
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DLToon In reply to J-Knight2008 [2014-06-20 22:53:25 +0000 UTC]
It's based on 's interpretation of the model as well as the schematics seen in the MLaaTR Christmas special.
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J-Knight2008 In reply to DLToon [2014-06-20 22:57:33 +0000 UTC]
Oh okay thanks for the answer man
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KaijuDuke [2014-01-21 05:47:18 +0000 UTC]
Nice work, reminds me a bit of this scene in The Return of Cooler (A DBZ movie), in which Vegeta & Goku charge the main antagonist, Cooler, together in the hopes that their combined strength can match his (he'd been wiping the floor with them individually earlier lol). Ironically, this plan could have actually worked on the show, GRANTED, Vexus hates organics, but I can see her taking advantage of Brit's hate for Jenny to get her hands on those pip crystals, AND this fusion form could even be used as a literal human shield, i.e. Jenny would be afraid to go all out for fearing of harming/taking a human life, even that of a bully like Brit.
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TFMUGENneedstohappen In reply to KaijuDuke [2015-01-18 08:21:41 +0000 UTC]
Misty: "She keeps kicking me in the cooch, WHY?! Why does she keep kicking me in the cooch?!"
XJ-10: "Hey, I think I know a way to beat h-"
Misty: "If you say hit her really hard, I swear to god I will kick YOU in the cooch!"
I hope you got the reference.
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technomizer [2012-07-08 23:05:50 +0000 UTC]
i want to read this fan-fic so bad now, but the person's been banned :I. still a great picture though.
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ImRaidAccount In reply to technomizer [2012-08-04 03:18:07 +0000 UTC]
Your complaint is invalid [link]
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