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A Few Came BeforeShe forgot the days
the nights were the same
blurred like the rest
from ghost stories she felt (by name),
down off the coast
in the worst fog so far
no trace of anyone
mostly just whispers from the conspirators
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beautiful poem and beautiful collage!
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yes
enjoyed most
yours is always the best
marked and recorded
the poem is still in motion
thanks kat
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always enjoy a Katian critikky
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then I will gladly continue
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always looked forward to
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its good to read your poem and then look at the picture
i have tried to take the poems theme...temporal distortion and ...alzheimers!....and apply it to the picture
and all i see are trees
whispers pass through the holes of the collage layers
the blue blocks me
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the work and the poem are separate at one time
then come together
often relating
true
whispers pass through the holes of the collage layers
you have to look beyond the blue
as we all do everyday when we look into a deep blue sky
there is always more than you see
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noo
closer to a B+
u basically get painting
doing is different
but then again
i was born into it
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This is lovely. I really like the colors. What is the text? Is that your poem?
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yes, a poem. I attach one to most posts
call me nuts
and thanks, the collage came out nice
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I think that is a good idea!
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WHat a wonderful use of color and composition, it just feels so right.
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thanks. this one has been sitting around for a couple years, finally decided to scan it.
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Is this a poem or lyrics … we are having a contest for collages inspired by or illustrating poems in the form of collage in #AlteredMixedCollages
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A poem i wrote. Seems I got in the habit and try to add one to every post i make. The pressure is on sometimes.
Is it on your front page, the thing you mention. Will go look. I might
giver a try. Thanks
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as bold as blue brass
multi-layered deconstruction
telling an incredibly imaginative story
this one i like like ... hmm like the worst fog ever
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thanks
this one was dangling there waiting
all came together
appreciate what you say
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little red splash in the middle
like something had happened there once
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true
part of something no longer existing
very good
thanks
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