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Published: 2008-04-04 02:15:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 375; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 1
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Description The Chances of Eight - Star Crash

In another time
of heavenly sights of the untouched earth
a star-cruiser crashes
into the split bow of a Nordic fuel tanker
bleeding bolts of steel
like a melting Catholic prayer candle,
the sparkling sounds of metal on metal
explosions and fire
fissures electric currents
and lights out in Manhattan,
along the Milky Way
the dark blue miracle
spins its thoughts
bouncing around
inside a cage
that flame the candle
of words never spoken,
darting days of blue eyes
slashing girders of high-rises
turning screws
bent beams like rubber bands
set in paint on the wall
a day at the races
with a man called Hank Chinaski
and the chances of eight
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Comments: 11

KanchanMahon [2011-09-19 12:31:42 +0000 UTC]

I know what it reinds me of a journal I wrote, about palimpsests and memory.
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DocSonian In reply to KanchanMahon [2011-09-20 03:14:28 +0000 UTC]

you mean removed
ahhh yes interesting
i can see that.. i enjoyed reading that
i knew the word, yet needed heavy reminding

thanks very much

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KanchanMahon [2011-09-19 12:29:03 +0000 UTC]

SO bold and graphic! Marvelous use of black here.

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DocSonian In reply to KanchanMahon [2011-09-20 03:15:23 +0000 UTC]

I tried for a feel of an old French poster
the black just made everything pop more
appreciate

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Lislao [2008-04-23 08:53:08 +0000 UTC]

I like the way you work!!! That's really impressive!!! Congratulations!!!

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DocSonian In reply to Lislao [2008-04-23 21:43:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks......I'm a bit of here and there and everywhere sometimes with my work

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Lislao In reply to DocSonian [2008-05-01 22:09:57 +0000 UTC]

That's the most beautiful in photo... Thanks for all the fav'!!!

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DocSonian In reply to Lislao [2008-05-11 00:34:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks

down in Venice
southern cal
and enjoying looking at your photos
from down here


be well

Marko

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faeriecrone [2008-04-04 21:06:22 +0000 UTC]

8, eh? a great symbol, is 8.

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DocSonian In reply to faeriecrone [2008-04-07 19:20:42 +0000 UTC]

the lazy sideways eight has always been the infinity to me
8pm was my bedtime as a kid
eight rhymes with late and that says it all
as I have to split for a date, so she doesn't have to wait by the gate near the plate of bait


sardines

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faeriecrone In reply to DocSonian [2008-04-08 00:32:21 +0000 UTC]

your new icon looks like one of the beach boys once they went shaggy.

she would be irate if she had to wait by the gate with the bait ...

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