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DoodlesandDaydreams — Making Kiyoshi

Published: 2008-03-14 06:08:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1122; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 6
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Description O'Keefe burst into his workshop with a clatter, lighting lamps and readying his tools with a speed born of necessity. The pudgy, crinkled looking doctor who had followed him up till now hung back in the doorway; clutching a small jug to his chest with the look of a man treading on forbidden ground. O'Keefe paid him no mind, turning his attention instead to his latest project. Rough calloused fingers caressed the smooth wood with surprising delicacy. Tracing patterns that would soon be laid down in blood and fire. Satisfied the pattern was properly fixed in his mind; he selected a fine fox hair brush from his collection, and motioned for the doctor to hand him the jug...

After Isaac had given over the jar of blood, he'd fled as fast as he could. But now, on the long dark walk back to town, his mind had caught up with him. He'd no idea how the old blood wizard had learned of the Riley family's son so quickly O'Keefe would pay handsomely for fresh blood, and if he survived the operation, little Connor was almost of an age for apprenticeship. But when Isaac had arrived at their house, O'Keefe was already there; and Isaac had found himself in the odd position of saving a boys life while his elder brother made sure every crimson drop spilt went into an earthenware jug instead of the floor.

Now that blood was being used to make a Golem. Golem's had always unsettled Isaac. He still remembered when they were only made by Rabbi's. When they were hated and feared as devils magic. Now they were everywhere, a status symbol, and though still feared, their creators were now respected as well. Still, how the Riley's thought their child was going to learn anything from a deaf man was beyond him.

A little blurb from the night Kiyoshi was made. Ten cool points to the first person who can guess why O'Keefe put so much work into the hands.
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Comments: 36

mooseyfategirl [2008-04-01 02:09:27 +0000 UTC]

ooooooooh this looks neat

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NakkiStiltz [2008-03-31 11:18:03 +0000 UTC]

wow, he looks absolutely awesome!

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Shiny-Marble [2008-03-31 03:44:58 +0000 UTC]

Woah. I draw things like that a lot. *glances at hand* Yup. I was bored in Chemistry. Heh, normally it's Calculus.

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jamesmathieu [2008-03-18 00:42:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm digging this character, and I can't wait to see more.

Though, he needs a duck-shaped golem for a pet.

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Easten [2008-03-15 05:10:38 +0000 UTC]

heit is to become a doctor and therefore needs stedy hands. so he can do sign launguage. did i win? too tired to do my normal guessing mauntage of rediculasness

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DoodlesandDaydreams In reply to Easten [2008-03-17 15:01:12 +0000 UTC]

SIGN LANGUAGE!!!!

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Easten In reply to DoodlesandDaydreams [2008-03-18 02:19:39 +0000 UTC]

Ha i thought so. you did say deaf doctor at one point in ur coments

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DoodlesandDaydreams In reply to Easten [2008-03-20 21:33:33 +0000 UTC]

well in the first thing I posted i revealed the maker was deaf if that's what you mean.

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perplexingPariah [2008-03-15 00:35:20 +0000 UTC]

Your imagination is really something! This is a very awesome and queer character! I can't wait to find out more about him!

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Silent-Mime [2008-03-14 22:57:47 +0000 UTC]

again, i'm in love with him and his cuteness! and the detail you put in the runes makes him look amazing! i'm a bit confused about the story, but from what i understand, its a great story! i can't wait to see more!

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EccentricRabbit [2008-03-14 22:48:28 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, this is so cool! I'm getting really interested in this story, it feels so dark and suspenseful...OwO I love all the runes, they're so intricate! Did you make them up yourself or pull them from different sources?

Oh oh oh! Since O'Keefe is deaf, did he put so much detail into Kiyoshi's hands so they could communicate through sign language? O 3O

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DoodlesandDaydreams In reply to EccentricRabbit [2008-03-17 15:00:51 +0000 UTC]

Yep. Someone else guessed it first. But you are still cool for getting it right.

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EccentricRabbit In reply to DoodlesandDaydreams [2008-03-20 09:18:35 +0000 UTC]

Yay, I'm cool! 8D!

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AnimeGal007 [2008-03-14 22:38:17 +0000 UTC]

It helps to move the fingers and something about that baby! XD

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Dragonmystic [2008-03-14 18:42:07 +0000 UTC]

Wow, man have you put a lot of thought into this. I am really liking this rune system of yours; very realistic and symbolic.

I am genuinely curious to see more of his life!

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kyri01 [2008-03-14 17:52:48 +0000 UTC]

Mabe to make sure he can move like a human?

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elainexe [2008-03-14 17:02:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow....he really does have that many runes! Hmm, what about ears though?
I thought the golem makers would use their own blood I guess maybe it's kinda much.
Very interesting! I won't be able to stop wondering now about everything; my mind will be occupied for a while...

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DoodlesandDaydreams In reply to elainexe [2008-03-17 14:59:59 +0000 UTC]

well using your own blood is well and good if you are young and spry and only making one every couple of months or so. But Mr. O'Keefe is running a buisnes here and he's no spring chick besides. He only spent the amount of time on Kiyoshi that he did because he's keeping him for himself. As for his ears, there is a set of runes on the sides of his head but most of it is built into the head rune.

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NerinokuKai [2008-03-14 14:11:58 +0000 UTC]

Man did you put some thought into this o-o

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Chima [2008-03-14 10:45:20 +0000 UTC]

oh wow...as far as the hands go, I agree with ~Guncannon on the need for a sense of touch and also dexterity, but I get the creeping suspicion that there's something else, too. Something symbolic, maybe?

heh, anyone who was saying he's a ripoff of someone else' character has no ground to stand on anymore. This dude is way original and way cool. I SO can't wait to hear more about him.

and HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH THOSE RUNES?! They're so gorgeous and awesome!

(btw, do you have a beta for your writing? There's a couple of things I noticed that weren't WRONG, necessarily, but made it a bit difficult to understand.)

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DoodlesandDaydreams In reply to Chima [2008-03-14 12:04:41 +0000 UTC]

I know. I lack your heft hand at a keyboard and way with words. You will just have to come over to Delaware sometime this week and help me out in person.

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Chima In reply to DoodlesandDaydreams [2008-03-14 20:30:20 +0000 UTC]

yeah, fat chance of me getting any time off from work...not to mention my mom still isn't speaking to me so I doubt she'd want me there. You could send me stuff before you post it, though ^-^;;

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Guncannon [2008-03-14 08:18:29 +0000 UTC]

oh and also to allow full motion of the hands and fingers

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DoodlesandDaydreams In reply to Guncannon [2008-03-14 12:02:24 +0000 UTC]

Yes! The hands are fully functioning! most the time golems don't even get a full set of fingers let alone all the joints and dexterity runes that Kiyoshi has. But can anybody tell me WHY? I'll give you a hint. Look at the last sentance of the story.

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MissDarkShiva In reply to DoodlesandDaydreams [2008-03-15 03:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh poo someone beat to too the answer =3= Oh well!

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MissDarkShiva In reply to DoodlesandDaydreams [2008-03-15 03:43:15 +0000 UTC]

Um um the hands had extra work on them for.... sign-lanague purposes? O__e

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DoodlesandDaydreams In reply to MissDarkShiva [2008-03-17 14:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Well you are right as well. you can hava a consolation prise of an emo muffin.

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MissDarkShiva In reply to DoodlesandDaydreams [2008-03-17 15:16:44 +0000 UTC]

8D YAY!!! *Crams muffin in mouth* OM NOM NOM

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Brandywine185 In reply to DoodlesandDaydreams [2008-03-14 14:41:34 +0000 UTC]

Just a wild guess from someone who's been watching your gallery but hasn't had the time to actually comment until now.

Could it be that the deaf man needs an interpreter that can use sign language?

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DoodlesandDaydreams In reply to Brandywine185 [2008-03-17 14:55:53 +0000 UTC]

Huzzah! You are the winner! ten coolio points for you and a big thanks for watching my stuff.

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Guncannon In reply to Brandywine185 [2008-03-14 18:22:07 +0000 UTC]

Darnit!!
you beat me to the catch XD

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AngelWarriorQueen In reply to Guncannon [2008-03-14 10:20:28 +0000 UTC]

Agreed on Both points.

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Guncannon [2008-03-14 08:11:30 +0000 UTC]

I'd say they are touch runes, to allow Kiyoshi a sense of touch... at least that's what first came to mind as I saw the pic without reading the description.....

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DoodlesandDaydreams In reply to Guncannon [2008-03-14 11:58:28 +0000 UTC]

Well they work for that puropse too, but touch runes are fairley simple and don't need near that amount of complexity to work. Guess again. ;D

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kaitoiscool [2008-03-14 06:23:13 +0000 UTC]

o3o almost looks like those really complicated hania tatoos :3

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NoxPsycho [2008-03-14 06:09:09 +0000 UTC]

I love the designs! Very intricate.

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