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Doom-san — Misara Beach WIP
Published: 2009-01-28 11:30:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 1031; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 70
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So this's a sketch that I started working on this afternoon.I'm still not very good at inking yet, but it's nice to try to get a better feel for the tools I have.
Also - I think the pic on the left might be my first real attempt at drawing legs! I like them ^^
I drew the left pic 'cause I tried to draw the right one but I kept screwin' up so I decided to draw a full-body pic for concept reference.
I'll probably ink this tomorrow in SAI (gonna go to sleep after posting this), but if anyone wants to give me some tips on anything I could try to fix up before I work on inking it, I'd appreciate the advice ^^
Mainly, I'm kinda wondering about this:
- How are the hands? are they the proper size?
- How about the arms? Is the raised arm too long or just right?
- How are the feet?
- The tail's not perfect and I've already redone it once, but should I try to redo it more?
- (For those of you that are familiar with her appearance) Do her eyes look alright?
Uhm. Also. I don't think this needs a Mature Content warning, but if anyone thinks it does, I'll reflag it.
Misara (c) =Doom-san
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i really like how you did the body!! <3 she looks adorable!!
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K. Hand on the right seems large, hand on the left seems a bit smal, and the wrist needs to taper more. I think you tried to draw her with tilted hips, but they aren't; the side on the left is just drawn higher than the side on the right. Lower the left side. Maybe lower the eyes a bit, and/or draw a bit more of the top of her head. The line that is attaching her boob to her arm needs to be angled more toward the top of the arm, not the inside. It doesn't matter however, if it's going to be covered by hair.
The legs look awesome. Great job.
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Cool; the only things that strikes out at me (though it may be just me) is her left hand's thumb. It's on the large side, making it look out of proportion with the rest of the hand.
But yeah, quite an awesome pic.
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