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Published: 2012-05-13 23:47:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 489; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 3
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Click for full!Point commission for Her three characters Goldenberry, Littleclaw and Silverwing. I like the results of this, but I can’t help but feel that I made Littleclaw to large and Goldenberry to small
I’ve been trying to improve my backgrounds, how does it look? I’ve been staring at it for hours, I can’t tell if It’s good or bad D:
Critiques Welcome! Comments Appreciated!
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20 layers drawn in GIMP….about…6 hours (give or take)
DO NOT COPY, RIDISTRIBUTE OR USE WITHOUT PERMISSION. ONLY *Zenaku-Chan AND ~Dovesplash HAVE RIGHTS TO THIS PICTURE.
-Hope it was worth your points!
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Comments: 8
Dovesplash In reply to iheartart121 [2012-05-16 00:57:17 +0000 UTC]
<3 thanks mist <3
Any tips for improvement?
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iheartart121 In reply to Dovesplash [2012-05-16 20:49:27 +0000 UTC]
Not that I can see! Your improving so well!
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Lyss504813 [2012-05-14 21:40:33 +0000 UTC]
Whoa, Dovey! This is awesome! The facial expressions are great, and I REALLY like the background! ^^ The texture on the log looks REALLY good, and I like the trees in the distance! <3
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Dovesplash In reply to Lyss504813 [2012-05-16 00:57:01 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
for the log I basically just used the burn tool ^^
I’ve been trying to spend more time on the backgrounds so they don’t steal the quality of the cats and such…
Any tips for improvement?
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iZenaku [2012-05-13 23:55:33 +0000 UTC]
Omg this is great!
The sizes of Littleclaw and Goldenberry are a little off, but we can just say that Little's on his toes, trying to look taller, and Golden's hunching down to make his brother look bigger like he knows he wants. LOL
I really love how Silverwing turned out, though. The pose and expression are absolutely perfect for her personality! <3
Just by looking at this one pic by you, you can definitely tell how much you've improved quickly, mostly by background and expressions. It really shows!
Thanks so much, I seriously love this!
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Dovesplash In reply to iZenaku [2012-05-14 00:02:10 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you like it^^ sorry about the height problems, I tried to make their legs different lengths, but their heads just ended up to close to the same height
Sliver is my favorit too <3
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iZenaku In reply to Dovesplash [2012-05-14 00:04:20 +0000 UTC]
It's fine. I'm sure you're not used to drawing such a great height difference anyway, lol.
Aww, that's awesome! <3
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