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Description Cadence’s First Real Submission
This is a scene from a role-play I did with the amazing I really had fun with this role-play it makes me laugh every time I read it XD


…"um-n-no" she stammered" Just thought you would want to get back before it's completely dark" her face remained emotionless, not wanting Lully to know her discomfort about the dark. She slowed down a little; too prove she wasn’t trying to rush ahead. The pink-water glanced at the sky, dodging Lully's questing glance. She let out a few nervous notes of a tune, this time a water tribe song; She always sang to calm herself, And it calmed her when others sang too. She continued walking silently behind the Green-water.

”No, not really. I've walked around in the dark before.” He replied with a carefree look. It was true though, he had wandered around during night many times when he lived by himself. Like so many else things, darkness didn’t bother him. Of course he did prefer day time, it’s easier to walk around then.
“Ah and watch where you put your paw, sometimes you might step on something you... shouldn’t really step on.” Lully called out with a slight chuckle. It sure was something he had learned from experience.

Cadence immediately glanced at her paws and saw a root protruding from the ground. She would have tripped over it if Lully hadn’t advised her. She stepped over it in triumph and big grin crossed her face. Still glancing at her paws she felt something sticky attach to her face. She wasn’t looking at her paws anymore, her eyes were squeezed tight as she ran around franticly, trying to shake the unknown trap off her face. Something’s got me! She thought as she raced about, her mouth open in a soundless scream. Something small was now moving over her face she opened her eyes for a second to see something small and black crawling on her nose A SPIDER! she continued to dash around in her wild sprint. “SPIDER!” she yelled, the small black arachnid still on her face. She tripped over something, and she opened her eyes to see the spider now scurrying over the ground. Turning her neck, she looked at the same root she had valiantly stepped over earlier and her face grew red with embracement. She stood up quickly and licked her shoulder before speaking “Um….lets continue on” she flashed Lully a small smile.

The sound of paws hitting the ground frequently caused Lully to turn around. It made him quite surprised to see the younger cat running around with closed eyes. With a very confused look, his eyes flew around; following every move of Cadence. He blinked, not sure what to say at the moment. His confusion ended, however, as soon as his apprentice had called ‘spider!’ and she laid flat on the ground from falling. After watching the whole ordeal, Lully had to bite his lip to not start laughing. It had been hilarious.
“Ahem, right...” With a slight cough he glanced to the side, small chuckles still slipping out.
“Heh... Kay, are you sure you are alright?”

"I’m fine" Cadence announced, her pride hurt more than anything. She turned and started to run back to her mentor's side when she felt something hold her paws down to the ground, and force her to flop ungracefully onto the soil again. There was no mistaking the pink blush, immeasurable across her face. She stood up again and found herself looking back at the root, and cursing it under her breath. Lull’s face held a mix of emotion, and she could tell he was suppressing a laugh. How could he find this Funny? she thought. I was just trying to get the spider off, and I tripped over a root!
Her face twisted into a smile before she began laughing, realizing how ridiculous she must of looked, dashing around the terrain, shaking her head and tripping over a root. She steeped over the root once more, her face holding a recognizable expression of humor. She continued to giggle as she arrived at Lully’s side. Her Warm brown eyes shone with delight as she looked into the green-water’s face.


:3 Anyway don’t look to closely at the cat’s anatomy Lully’s stomach is a bit….off…I tried to fix it several times but it didn’t look any better I messed up a few places…If you have any sugestions on improvement I would love to hear them
And if you didn’t see [link] ( ’s version of this) you need to go check it out!
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Comments: 24

Jei-Dinofelini [2011-11-27 12:53:00 +0000 UTC]

thats so cute
ur art is getting better and better

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Dovesplash In reply to Jei-Dinofelini [2011-11-30 23:40:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!!
yours too!

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Jei-Dinofelini In reply to Dovesplash [2011-12-02 12:10:13 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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Jei-Dinofelini [2011-11-27 12:52:52 +0000 UTC]

thats so cute
ur art is getting better and better

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LynnyRose [2011-11-20 17:13:20 +0000 UTC]

so, this is what you were talking about. your work just keeps getting better and better. (and i read the story this time)

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Dovesplash In reply to LynnyRose [2011-11-20 19:43:43 +0000 UTC]

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Snowwire [2011-11-18 20:50:44 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha~ and there she fell!
This is so cute, I love Cadence expression. Poor thing~ :'D
And look at Lully giggling and all
Thanks for drawing this as well!
Though I have to say... you kinda drew Lully's old design.

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Dovesplash In reply to Snowwire [2011-11-18 22:56:52 +0000 UTC]

WHAT?!! Lully's Design changed?
;3; Im sorry! I had the old file saved on my computer and I supose I forgot to check back on it! I might have time to fix it later next week! im so sorry!

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Snowwire In reply to Dovesplash [2011-11-18 23:09:46 +0000 UTC]

Lol yes, just some minor changes. xP
Hehe but it's alright, don't worry about it. xD <3

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Dovesplash In reply to Snowwire [2011-11-18 23:29:38 +0000 UTC]

are you sure?

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Snowwire In reply to Dovesplash [2011-11-19 21:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it's fine dear. ;3 <3

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Planeta-Starlight [2011-11-17 01:20:21 +0000 UTC]

The picture is so cute! So is the story! Your digital art is better than mine!

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Dovesplash In reply to Planeta-Starlight [2011-11-18 22:59:19 +0000 UTC]

^^ thank you star!
Im not that good at digital, and I didn't get to my current skill level overnight! look at my first digital picture! [link] XD

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Planeta-Starlight In reply to Dovesplash [2011-11-18 23:10:14 +0000 UTC]

Awe, even for your first, that's adorable! If you were wondering why I asked for a design, I'm trying to get into , with Almia being in the Water Tribe, but the the message always appears 7-9 hours earlier before I get a chance to look at the journal....sigh. WAIT! Have you made any new comments on the RP's in and ...wow, 3 group icons in one comment.

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Dovesplash In reply to Planeta-Starlight [2011-11-18 23:32:54 +0000 UTC]

I would Love it if you made TGB!!!hurry though....theirs only one spot left!! If your confused with anything ask me and I'll try and help you

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Planeta-Starlight In reply to Dovesplash [2011-11-18 23:35:08 +0000 UTC]

Okay! I just need to draw the app. but now, I'll just wait for the next journal to pop up so to make sure my app. won't get declined.

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Dovesplash In reply to Planeta-Starlight [2011-11-19 15:55:38 +0000 UTC]

?

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Planeta-Starlight In reply to Dovesplash [2011-11-19 16:24:36 +0000 UTC]

I meant I think someone already took the spot so I'm going to wait for the next journal saying they have more spots.

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Dovesplash In reply to Planeta-Starlight [2011-11-19 16:35:59 +0000 UTC]

oh ok

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Dragon75394 [2011-11-17 01:00:59 +0000 UTC]

I JUST LOVE THE WAY YOU DRAW CATS!!! IT"S SO ADORABLE!!

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Dovesplash In reply to Dragon75394 [2011-11-18 22:59:06 +0000 UTC]

^^ thanks

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Dragon75394 In reply to Dovesplash [2011-12-02 18:05:02 +0000 UTC]

np

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iheartart121 [2011-11-17 00:59:18 +0000 UTC]

Aww so cute!!

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Dovesplash In reply to iheartart121 [2011-11-18 22:59:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you mist!

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