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Published: 2011-09-10 02:46:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1002; Favourites: 82; Downloads: 14
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CRITIQUE PLEASE!!!!!,I want to improve!COMMENT PLEASE!~dont just fave, i want to know why you faved it, its verry mush apriciated <3
So ya, I havent done done dove in a wile so i decided to do her
i love dovely <3 this took 3 days on and off, so about 5 hours, gosh, i dident know i spent that much time on this until I did the math just now XDi like it...sure a few things arent perfect but i like it....Look at those puffy clouds i drew....
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Hehe, thanks, It is quite a bit old XD
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"This was a triumph... I'm making a note here: 'huge success'"
Sorry, I couldn't resist xD
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XD I love a portal quote every one and a while ^^
thanks!
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No problem; it's adorable ^^
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this is amazing!
the facial expressin is so cute, and background rocks!
well done!
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Awww thank you ^^ I like the way the clouds came out too
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make more great art! get famous in the big world! i know you'll deserve it!
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I adore her cute expression! She looks in bliss! That, and I also like how the clouds aren't just white blobs in the sky!
I would say a target is to have a lineart? This si quite a soft pic, and I understand that you wouldn't want to ruin the branches by outlining them in black, but if you did the lineart in a darker version of the colour, I'm sure it will still maintain the softness!
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<3 thanks, I will put your advice into my next creation~
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any time. I hope you found it helpful.
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omg! this is sooooo cute! i love Dove! this is amazing!
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this is awesome! i love it!!
ill write u a critique later! i need to think what to write
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<3 thanks , cant wait for a critique!
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this is awesome! i love it!!
ill write u a critique later! i need to think what to write
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^^ did you still want to do a critique, I know I could learn alot from you <3
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yh ill write teh critiques as soon as i have enough time to write u a long essay about ur drawing
it takes me a while to finish it
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Very cute!! The only thing I could say is the back leg is a little fat and front legs look kind of stiff but other then that it's very well drawn and cute! The colors match nice and flow very well (:
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I faved it because... I don't really know. I guess its because it relaxes me a little.
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it relaxis me too XD
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wow thats really good! you are so creative my friend, i love cats and this picture is just plain out awesome, keep up the great work!
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Thanks
I drew most of the sketch in a tree, that is until i droped my pencil XD XD XD
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your welcome! LOL hahaha thats funny GREAT JOB THOUGH!
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Its soo amazing and very good focus on the facial features.
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As I said, I love this a lot. I'm more awake now, so I can give a proper critique.. maybe x'D
I LOVE her face. The way it's tilted up as if she loves feeling a breeze in her fur, and it makes her look proud. SHE'S BEAMING WITH JOY AND I LOVE IT. And also, the paws are tilted correctly and it shows that she is balencing herself on the tree branch. She must really be calm.
The only bad thing I see is the back right paw. I think a paw pad should be showing a little bit or something should be there. The leg looks...blank. Like a blob or something.
This is one of the only critiques I have ever given x'D
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i love her face too, its my new avie XD
yes....that stupid paw! when i scaned the sketch the cornner of the paper got folded over that leg...so i had to kinda free hend it with out my sketch, thanks for the critique!~
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