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hydroflorix [2018-06-04 03:34:57 +0000 UTC]

Your colouring is just incredible- I loved that vibrant lava especially. I'm really amazed at the level of rendering you achieved on every page!

I liked the approach to the end of the fight- like Kid said it's rare to see a forfeit, and I think you executed that very well- made perfect sense with the story and the characters. I loved seeing the contrasts between Fable/Sabriel and Chris/Terriermon, too!

Overall a fun, beautiful, and compelling round

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MinitaurKid [2018-05-23 02:48:16 +0000 UTC]

There's something oddly satisfying watching your own oc lose, and I hardly come across people's comics where they voluntarily surrender. Which is where Fable comes in to rage quit, lel. It'll make things more interesting to see how the loss affects the characters.

Overall, each page is stunning when it comes down to the art. I remember you mentioned being worried about making my own characters ooc, but you totally nailed their personalities down. I just wonder what's going to happen to Chris and Lucemon  now that the demon lord situation seemed settled from the earlier pages.

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