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Published: 2014-03-28 04:09:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 5851; Favourites: 111; Downloads: 44
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Description HOLY DIIIIICK
THIS IS BY FAR THE LONGEST TAKING THING TO DRAW I HAVE LIKE EVER DONE
>12 HOURS OR SOMETHING??? WOWZA 
ANYWAY

I had been wanting to do this for a looong time, and being able to double its' use as an Art class assignment pushed me to do eet :>

my babiesss Chester and Oliver: 


now in cute cuddly gay form~ 

 the lyrics are from The Fray's song Say When

PS the file is 40 x 55 inches so it literally took like half an hour to even flip it orz
RESIZING IS FOR THE WEAK 

critiques welcome!!
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Comments: 11

AndrewDoris [2014-03-28 17:06:50 +0000 UTC]

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Hi Dreamer, this is a nice piece, I like how it works in conjunction with the poem. A few things that would make this stronger
1 The centaur's body is too straight on, it would be better if his horse body was more visible on screen right.
2 His head should be a little lower towards his chest, if you put your head down, the bottom of your chin should almost touch your collarbones
3 Your shadows are pretty good and they all reflect the same light direction, but you need one for the mermaid's hand where it touches the centaurs chest. Put it in and the contact will be stronger.
4 The mermaid's neck is a little off, it needs to hook up under her jaw a bit better. If you look at where that color break happens on her chin, the neck should slope into that spot. Also, the shadow under her chin there is causing the chest patter to look like its actually terminating towards her right ear.
Hope this helps,
Andrew

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dreameroftheblue In reply to AndrewDoris [2014-03-28 17:13:44 +0000 UTC]

oooh you're so right thANK YOU FRIEND VERY HELPFUL

I think I might fix some things later ah thanks again :>

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AndrewDoris In reply to dreameroftheblue [2014-03-28 17:43:25 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome, glad you found it helpful.

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sandcastler [2016-03-29 22:50:33 +0000 UTC]

Love the carrying pose!

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dreameroftheblue In reply to sandcastler [2016-03-30 00:20:34 +0000 UTC]

thank ya! there aren't many other options when you wanna go somewhere with your merman boyfriend, ahah   

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CKentavr [2014-03-28 23:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Sweet!  The contrasting characters helps sell it, too.

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dreameroftheblue In reply to CKentavr [2014-03-29 18:55:18 +0000 UTC]

ahh thank you so much~

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CrypticCritters [2014-03-28 20:56:55 +0000 UTC]

THE CUTENESS OVERLOAD!!! and omg i think i have the hots for oliver! preowr!

LOVE this

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dreameroftheblue In reply to CrypticCritters [2014-03-29 18:58:28 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU KINDLY SIR~

AND THIS MAKES ME EXTRAORDINARILY HAPPY AHH I THINK I'LL TELL HIM 8D

 

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FierySintle [2014-03-28 14:18:27 +0000 UTC]

HGFUYHGTDTYTDUGFHJVHJ *explodes*
SOO MUCH KAWAIIII

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dreameroftheblue In reply to FierySintle [2014-03-28 17:09:31 +0000 UTC]

ahHHH THANK YOUUU~

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