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Published: 2016-10-07 00:35:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 4223; Favourites: 194; Downloads: 0
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A cup is just a cupuntil it's the last cup that she touched,
and a car
is just a way from a to b
until it's the way that she arrived
at z.
A picture in a frame
is lovely to see, even if only ever viewed
in the background, passively,
but when the image
locks in place
the last smile on her face
then your grief turns to regret
for the memory
trapped beneath the glass.
An old pair of slippers,
tucked neatly beside the door,
stepping over
every time you cross the threshold,
until the day
when you have to toss those old things away
and they are as heavy as anchors
and more treasured
than diamond.
A scent that fills your head,
the comfort of a familiar figure and
a warm embrace,
but when you can no longer detect it's fragrance,
it becomes a mystery
impossible to solve,
a memory lost to time
like the ghost of a kiss
lost somewhere among the rest.
A name is just a name
until it's torn from the tongue and carved
into the stone,
and a dream
is a just a thing between the night and the light,
until it's the only way that she
can ever be.
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Comments: 74
Cin-Derr [2017-11-08 21:37:06 +0000 UTC]
Damn.Β
Amazing.
You deserve this DD my friend, more than most.
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dreamsinstatic In reply to Cin-Derr [2017-11-13 06:52:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, you're very kind!
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Damaged-but-Adorable [2017-02-12 05:06:18 +0000 UTC]
why would you make me ... Feel like this .;-; Its so wonderful.Β
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dreamsinstatic In reply to Damaged-but-Adorable [2017-02-13 02:28:36 +0000 UTC]
We all feel like this, sometimes. Β Thank you.
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dreamsinstatic In reply to underworldriver [2017-01-18 21:15:17 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much.
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LindArtz [2016-12-05 14:56:48 +0000 UTC]
Nice work!Β Β Β Congratulations on your much deserved DD!Β Enjoy the limelight.
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Battlepants05 [2016-12-05 03:44:55 +0000 UTC]
Great work, this pairs perfectly with the phrase "you don't miss it until it's gone." Very well deserved DD
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LaurenIpsome [2016-12-02 20:30:50 +0000 UTC]
Congrats on the DD!!! Well deserved indeed! And quite true, how we don't really "appreciate" the mundane until it's deemed "too late"
"Stumble over tomb stone shoes, I reach to surround you, but it's too soon," -X
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BlackBowfin [2016-12-02 12:55:09 +0000 UTC]
Jeez, this is one of the most beautiful poems I've read in a while. Β Congrats on the DD. Β
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dreamsinstatic In reply to BlackBowfin [2016-12-02 20:57:32 +0000 UTC]
Wow, thank you so much.
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Ladygentlemanbastard [2016-12-02 05:03:43 +0000 UTC]
This is a lovely piece! You taken something known to everyone who has lost a loved one and not only put it into words, but made it new again.
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dreamsinstatic In reply to Ladygentlemanbastard [2016-12-02 20:57:50 +0000 UTC]
I am glad you think so!
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dreamsinstatic In reply to wispy-blue [2016-12-02 11:27:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for reading.
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elephantsarecool [2016-12-01 23:07:39 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is really powerful. Great job
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andycwhite [2016-12-01 22:03:35 +0000 UTC]
My dad passed away 10 months ago, so this poem really speaks to me...Heartbreaking, but beautifully written and so very, very true. Congrats on the well-deserved DD <3
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dreamsinstatic In reply to andycwhite [2016-12-02 11:28:14 +0000 UTC]
I'm very sorry for your loss. Β I wrote this mostly based on my grandmother, who passed away last August. Β
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JedEkho [2016-12-01 21:49:14 +0000 UTC]
This made me cry.
But I guess that is a good thing
Great work
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ErraticEick [2016-12-01 21:33:08 +0000 UTC]
My mother died just a year ago, and this poem does an excellent job of capturing how the world changes after an event like that.
Thank you.
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dreamsinstatic In reply to ErraticEick [2016-12-02 11:28:33 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry for your loss.
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MollyMcMolly [2016-12-01 16:38:24 +0000 UTC]
You've captured perfectly how an event in one's life can change one's perspective on everything else.Β
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