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WAHA! FINALLY got this done!^_^V and with time to spare!XDehehehTis ze PE Comic Exchange for ...they be HER charas...NOT mine...so yea...anyhow!^o^
yeshyesh...took me a bit to get this going, as I had NO idea where to begin and end without telling a 10 page story sequence!O_O;;;...I think 4 pages is a fair amount!XD
The toning here...well...could have been a WEE bit better...but...at least you get the idea
BWAHAAHAHAHAHA!!! LET'S HEAR IT FOR CHEESY ROMANTIC DIALOGUE!!^O^
am so sorry Loreli!#^_^#....but...I just could resist...it just...well...went with the whole thing and stuffs...I can post the textless version if anyone feels they'd like to see that...though I don't think it'd make much of a difference>.>;;
ALRIGHTY!!! Enough of my babbling...ON WITH DA SHOW!!!!^O^
Done with mechanical pencil, gel ink pens, Photoshop 7 for digital tones and text/dialogue and touchups! ARF!XP
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Comments: 26
maebishonu [2005-04-12 02:13:53 +0000 UTC]
awwwwww.... how cute and fuzzy and it makes me feel all warm inside!
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Tentopet [2005-02-26 14:39:08 +0000 UTC]
Your facial expressions are just SO ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL that I just don't know what to do with you! I mean, seriously--I'm SOOOOO excited for your series to come out. You really are more talented than a lot of people are who have gotten signed. It's such a shame that it took them so long to realize that! But yes--facial expressions are the most important thing to me, and it pisses me off that you're better at them!!!
Ya know, I wish I could see more of stuff like this from you--if not a comic, then maybe an illustration that tells more of a story than a pose would. You know, Norman Rockwell-ish but in your own way? It'd be cool to see your characters and what they're really like within various surroundings and stuff.
Just a thought!
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DreamworldStudio In reply to Tentopet [2005-02-26 17:41:30 +0000 UTC]
ReallyO_O???
Thank you#^________^#
Yea...I REALLY need to get in the habit of creating better illustrations....like you said...ones that tell a story...I've been slacking BIG time in that department lately XP
hmmm....more comic work, eh?....well...I'll have to think about that....as I'll soon be UBER swamped with the NEW project TP has me on...the one I was on before got CANNED cause the writer was a total "BUTT!", thusly quoting my editor!XD...but this new project....yea...still shoujo in genre...but...much nicer than that other project^_^V...I just can't wait to announce more info on it...but first...contracts need to be signed>.>;;;
In the meantime...yupyup..I shall see about doing some more comic work to post...there is a short story I've been meaning to illustrated sequentially...but...yea...don't know if I'll have the time to do it>.>...and I've a few pieces of artwork in the works at the moment..but...I'll see what I can do!^_^V
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Tentopet In reply to DreamworldStudio [2005-02-26 18:11:27 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, pretty soon, you'll be doing so much comic drawing that really, illustrations will be a break! That's why I'm thinking it'd be cool to do storytelling illustrationy thingies.
Oh MAN, I would love to hear your story about your writer. I myself am in the very slow process of getting a deal, but I figure if I keep bothering my editor it'll happen eventually! I'm glad you're doing something you like more! Will it be your own story?? (Don't feel the need to tell me anything if you can't)
But yeah, I really feel that emotions are one of your HUGE strengths, and I wish you'd showcase it more in your illustrations! 'Twould make me so happyyyyyyy!
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DreamworldStudio In reply to Tentopet [2005-02-27 03:45:04 +0000 UTC]
INDEED!...Very true!^^
I SO can't wait to blab about the whole deal!! It's gonna be HUGE!! at least...that's what my editor seems to think...as well as all the other editors and the EIC!O_O;...but YUP! I guess I can say that...well...I'm co-creator on it...the story idea came from a silly short dream I had;...you'd be QUITE surprised to hear what it's about...unfortunately am not allowed to say anything other than that of courseXP
ReallyO_O...wow>.>; never noticed or knew that there was THAT much emotion in my worksT_O;; I mean...I know there are a LOT of emotions when I'm working on them...but...yea...wowOO...thank you dear^________^
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Tentopet In reply to DreamworldStudio [2005-02-27 06:53:29 +0000 UTC]
Well, I'm happy to help you realize it!!! I already knew it was there, but seeing these reminded me of how much I'd like to see more of it.
I'm soooooo excited to hear about your story!!!
It's funny--you know what I'd like to do a comic on? I'd like to do a compilation of short stories inspired by all my experiences while driving. I get so much inspiration during that time. I've got 5 or 6 short stories under my belt now. I'd like to do one purely about an argument going back and forth on bumper stickers. And another one about a grocery store where a girl got into an accident, so they made a law that all the carts had to have blinkers. And then they start needing lane laws and then they start getting rude and their carts start getting more and more high tech and look like cars...and something tragic happens at the end. And then I want to write another one about how after rush hour, about 10 o' clock, all the mini-vans come out of hiding to have a great mini-van party. Anyway, I KNOW TP wouldn't want that, but dang it would be fun!
(Think I'm crazy yet?)
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DreamworldStudio In reply to Tentopet [2005-02-27 07:44:37 +0000 UTC]
LMFAO!! yea...shopping carts really DO need lights...those things are dangerous in the wrong hands!!LOL!!^^
believe me...I don't think you're crazy at all!...as I'm most likely equally crazy...well...a sane sort of crazy I guess>.>;;;
yupyup...I DO have a short story I could use to just practice sequential work in general...it's a story I'd eventually like to pitch to TP...but...hmmm...it has a little shounen-ai feel to it...but....it doesn't go that far...but it more suggests it than anything...it's the story "My Cat Loki"...of which, the chara sketches are in my scrap gall, so you've most likely seen them and know what I'm talking about...I thinkT_O;;;;
BLAH! now I'm just babbling...and it's 2:45amO_O;; and I have to work 11am-6pmO_O;; I should be in bed!OO;
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Tentopet In reply to DreamworldStudio [2005-03-01 03:58:26 +0000 UTC]
Oh, actually, I HAVEN'T heard of this story you've come up with! *Goes to take a look*--Awwwww, so cute!!! Yes, this would be a sweet story, and very marketable, methinks!
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HisuiKirei [2005-02-26 05:28:21 +0000 UTC]
awww so sweeet but didnt he have blood all over his face? :
its cool anyway!
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DreamworldStudio In reply to HisuiKirei [2005-02-26 05:36:55 +0000 UTC]
ah shit!O_O;;; oh yeaT_T;; oh wellXP
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HisuiKirei In reply to DreamworldStudio [2005-02-26 05:38:04 +0000 UTC]
at leats i spotted it....
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KinjouTen [2005-02-26 04:35:40 +0000 UTC]
The inkwork, motion, and layout on this was fantastic. I really enjoyed it.
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KierstenViolette [2005-02-26 01:53:42 +0000 UTC]
This is wonderful. The drawings, the layouts-great great work! If you do it on the computer how do you get the dotted texture through-out the whole thing. IT's just fantastic. It looks so professional! ^_^ Love it!
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ohnojaylo [2005-02-25 18:15:25 +0000 UTC]
ha ha ha cheesy dialogue rocks
for some reason i think of keanu reeves when i read that
but the artwork rocks
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LoreliAoD [2005-02-25 08:45:17 +0000 UTC]
Okay, I lied... this is my favorite page. It's got everything I love about these two, Lore can be crazy posessed and Zane still can't be swayed, that silly boy. I ADORE the toning on his arms in the last panel, he's so sexy buff without being crazy ripped XD And their embrace is so believable. I wish we could have given everyone the entire back story (but I don't want to give away too much of my project ^_^;;> So they could feel this as intensly as I do, knowing what I know about the characters. But even without back story you brought emotion across so well.
I think I'm going to cry now... ;_;
But yes, I'm so honored to have a part of my story rendered by you, thank you and expected much thank you art XD
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enialadam [2005-02-25 08:39:14 +0000 UTC]
They look great! the motion and toning is fantastic great work!
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ippus [2005-02-25 08:20:34 +0000 UTC]
it's...so....fast.....
....
I am lost in the abyss of confusion...
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KamikazeJL [2005-02-25 07:15:26 +0000 UTC]
That was the best most heart-wrenching 4 panel I've ever read.
Action scenes, shading, incredi-mundo.
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myre [2005-02-25 06:15:58 +0000 UTC]
So VERY awesome! *shock and awe* Beautifully rendered, and very professionally layed-out. :3
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NCWeber [2005-02-25 05:58:15 +0000 UTC]
Oooh, it was intentionally cheesy. Ok, I feel better about it then.
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jakface [2005-02-25 05:56:48 +0000 UTC]
Oh. My. GOD Bettina! YOU RULE!! This is SOOO AMAZING!!!
This whole comic!!! Loreli is SOOO lucky and it makes me so jealous I didn't enter the comic exchange myself! X___X stupid business..
man, AWESOME job with the toning, the whole thing was just SO gorgeous to view. <3
Beautiful stuff.
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