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H.P. Lovecraft's The Call of Cthulhu (for beginning readers).Next: [link]
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(This is the updated version of pages 10 & 11 here: [link] )
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"Just one of the members who were there assembed
Could think of a thing that the thing there resembled,"
are lines worthy of Dr. Seuss himself
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I must agree with Rogue428. I will go out and HAVE kids just so I can read this to them.
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You're doing a great job of redoing these, especially the text. This particular one had bothered me in its original form; this version is much better. And really, awesome work on the whole thing in its entirety. It's just spectacular.
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This is brilliant on a scale I can't even fathom. Please tell me you intend on publishing this.
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The fourth line seems a bit long. Consider:
Then with questions was Lagrasse beset.
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Hey Geo,
Thanks for caring about this thing enough to offer constructive criticism.
The anapestic tetrameter scans something like this:
when leGRASSE had preSENTed a STONE statuETTE
then with QUESTions from EXperts leGRASSE was beSET
(This is complicated by the when/then rhyme at the start, I know)
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Thanks for the reply. When you put it in meter like that I see how it works.
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