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Description Only three more pages to go! Woo! And it only took 7 pages to get the exposition out of the way. Shame on me. And now that I'm here I've no idea if any of this is making sense or not. We'll have to see.

Hm. I usually have more stuff to say than this, but I guess I got nothing.

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Sharpe19 [2008-02-25 00:42:12 +0000 UTC]

I am seriously loving Lightstep! Just his design makes me wish there was a model of him out there in the world. A toy of him if you will.

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Fixxen [2008-02-15 14:52:39 +0000 UTC]

Great page!! Can't wait to read more

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aokamidu [2008-02-14 18:51:52 +0000 UTC]

Heh.. didn't think I'd hear anyone else use "innocuous"... rock and roll, Dino-Lady. Anyway, yet another beautifully executed page to your story... I'm indeed very curious to see how you'll resolve all this within three pages, quite a mammoth task (to an outsider like me) now we've established the majority of the cast and now their relationships to one another. Although that sudden cliffhanger at the end was certainly a twist in the tail (pun intended). You certainly do have a lot of writing prowess, which shines in your dialogue... little surprise then that your pacing and panelling seem to be spot on. If it weren't for the fact your raptors are naturally the bad guys, I'd be quite taken with them!

Nevertheless, just another bit of random babble and appraisal, really. Please keep it up, Ma'am... but don't stress yourself over the project neither! A relaxed hand writes more fluently than a wretched-with-stress one. Or something...

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White-Winter-Fox [2008-02-14 01:39:11 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS SOOOO COOL!!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!

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Gildawraith [2008-02-14 00:34:35 +0000 UTC]

awwww only three more pages to go *sniffle sniffle* me love it

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Senraikin [2008-02-14 00:06:46 +0000 UTC]

I have a question and please don't take this offensively. In your panel, Lightstep appears to be bigger, like a T-rex compared to the other dinosaur. He is suppose to be that big or are the other dinosaurs small?

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Droemar In reply to Senraikin [2008-02-14 01:06:54 +0000 UTC]

Lightstep is a Utahraptor, which were about 9 feet tall and 22 feet long. Moss and Root are young Iguanodons, which when full grown were about 30 feet long and and 10 feet high. I am trying to keep scale and all that in mind for the next page, when the raptors will be in the same panel as the grandmother, Lily.

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Senraikin In reply to Droemar [2008-02-14 21:18:26 +0000 UTC]

Just wanted to ask. I previously thought that raptors were smaller than most dinosaurs. Thanks for the fact. Because I knew either I wasn't understanding something or maybe (Not accusing) the portions weren't right.

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Droemar In reply to Senraikin [2008-02-14 22:11:27 +0000 UTC]

Velociraptor was a very small little guy, and he's probably the most popular. The proportions of the raptors in Jurassic Park were based closer to Denonychus, a 6 foot tall predator. Utahraptor is the largest of the maniraptors, I believe.
I make no claims of being an expert! Expect a few more panels with incorrect proportions! Huzzah!

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Senraikin In reply to Droemar [2008-02-14 23:42:46 +0000 UTC]

That's probably why. Have you ever heard of Guamlong? (I don't think I spelled it right.) Yeah, you do have a good point there. I call my friend a Velociraptor because she runs like one. xD Don't worry about it. I love learning from others. But I'm glad I found someone who likes dinosaurs like I do. I'm not claiming to be an expert either but I know my facts. *in response to your last sentence* =O

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Majnouna [2008-02-13 10:22:43 +0000 UTC]

Suspense!! Now I'm CURIOUS.

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Droemar In reply to Majnouna [2008-02-13 17:47:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh, like you weren't before.

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Majnouna In reply to Droemar [2008-02-14 08:39:35 +0000 UTC]

yeah but now I'm like "OMG what's HER story??"

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Shade703 [2008-02-13 05:28:28 +0000 UTC]

wewt!! Tat is awesome!

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wadifahtook [2008-02-13 02:37:04 +0000 UTC]

Another excellently executed page of superb artwork. Keep it up...if your hands will let you..

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HollowRaevin [2008-02-13 00:50:13 +0000 UTC]

Way awsome Droe! I like how you are slowly revealing what, exactly, the laws are rather than having a big ol' monologue that just lists them all.

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Many-Of-Me [2008-02-12 23:04:25 +0000 UTC]

I Love The 'OMG OHNOES' Look In The Last Panel. Made Me Snicker.

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blueeyedpython [2008-02-12 23:01:10 +0000 UTC]

oh my goodness this is amazing, your comic is so elegantly organized and gorgeous pics! cant wait to see the next page!

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swiftblight [2008-02-12 22:52:36 +0000 UTC]

YAY. This rulessss. What did you use for the background? D8 How did you come up with this awesome idea!!?!??!


Cliffhangerrr.... yaya ^^ btw the 9th frame looks a bit strange.... Better than I could do, but strange...

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Droemar In reply to swiftblight [2008-02-13 01:45:48 +0000 UTC]

If by strange you mean crooked, then yes. I have no sense of straight aesthetics. If you mean strange in any other sense, I've drawn a running hadrosaur badly ...

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swiftblight In reply to Droemar [2008-02-13 02:08:41 +0000 UTC]

I dunno, it's not really that, it just looks odd that the hadrosaur is trying to make a human like gesture, I suppose


(ps: I read you sig, and did you create this idea?)

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Droemar In reply to swiftblight [2008-02-13 03:28:03 +0000 UTC]

You mean Rhymar? Yeah, that's one of my fantasy series waiting in the publication wings. The first novel has been written (a couple of years ago, actually.) You can find loads of old art in my gallery.
The cheat and charmer line is not mine, it is by A.E. Housman, a superb poet.
If by chance you are referring to Mark of the Conifer, yes, that is my own idea, too. I wanted to do a Watership Down-esque fantasy about dinosaurs.

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swiftblight In reply to Droemar [2008-02-13 11:47:32 +0000 UTC]

^^ awesimness, i wish that i could put down my story ideas on paper. v_v Unfortunetly, I never have a plot, just character ideas and bits and pieces.

Watership Down was a really cool book, maybe I'll look for you if you decide to publish any of this.

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Starhorse [2008-02-12 22:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Oooh! That was unexpected. And I reallly like your raptors so far...they've managed to both be not just polite but...gentlemanly (wish there was a word for both genders with the same feel) and completely terrifying at the same time. The last line of page six was particularly good too.

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Droemar In reply to Starhorse [2008-02-13 01:41:21 +0000 UTC]

Well, I was inspired by the bushido code, and the over-the-top interpretation of it in anime. "You have just cut off my arm, sir! I am proud to die at the skilled hands of a worthy opponent!"

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Starhorse In reply to Droemar [2008-02-13 03:37:07 +0000 UTC]

LOL! No...yers is much better. I seriously like...(hate this word, but it fits) squee'd over that last line of page six for oh...three days or so?

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Droemar In reply to Starhorse [2008-02-13 04:42:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh, like we all don't know how this is gonna end!

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skyefeather [2008-02-12 22:28:03 +0000 UTC]

WOOT!

cliff-hanger! major cliff-hanger!

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Marcynuk [2008-02-12 22:24:07 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait to see what is going to happen... Is there only 3 pages left? or just in this chapter?

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Droemar In reply to Marcynuk [2008-02-13 01:32:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh, jeez. 3 pages left period, cause I'd prolly kill myself otherwise!
It's like 10 hours of work a page.

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Marcynuk In reply to Droemar [2008-02-13 02:57:45 +0000 UTC]

lol I hear that... its taken me like 2 years to get 20 pages done on mine >_<
Having School doesn't help either ..

I Really liked your Comic about monsters.. so touching. I keep thinking about the very last line randomly throughout my day, and I read it awhile ago. ^_^ You are very good at creating comics... I cannot wait to see how this ends... and in 3 pages!


urr... sorry I typed a lot.. :/

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Droemar In reply to Marcynuk [2008-02-13 03:30:23 +0000 UTC]

I like long comments. I read fast, so the one-liners often seem innocuous.

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hatleopard [2008-02-12 22:15:36 +0000 UTC]

Very nice :3 Love it so far!

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