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OH MAN THE UPYR KING THAT GUY JUST DOES SOME SERIOUS SHIT DAMNIDY DOWebsite is ahead on updates by a week!: colorblindcomic.com/
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Your use of the colors, movement, proportions and frames are excelent! I like it very much!
Maybe the only problem I have is the text. Personally I'd leave the spaces in blank, and add the text digitally later. Also, this have the future options to translate the comic in other languages e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
I like the details you use in each frame. But study other types of frames, is bored when you see just rectangles and squares in a comic strip. Evaluate some professional mangas or comics, you'll see some frames have no border and that makes it dinamics and interesting.
I'd modify the ballon dialogues, they look big, or, I really don't know what word to use, they look weird. And personally are uncomfortable to read.e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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the upyr king? wasnt that the blue lord or something (too bad hes dead i liked him)
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The blue lord is a separate person from the king, kings and lords aren't the same thing :>
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ah yes i noticed XD
too bad the blue lord is dead, i dunnow i liked his face
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Just a little comment because of the critic : i disagree with the comment about your text. I like to see a script text, and your way to write is good, i have no problem to read any letter. Making them in digit will be more easy, yes, but i will not be the same.
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THAT KING NEEDS TO STOP DOING THAT
those bbys are too fabulous to be tied to medallions
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He's King Dickface, he don't care about anyone's fabulousness but his own.
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It's pronounced "Oop-ear" :>
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Yay, now I'll say it right when I'm reading speech bubbles in my head
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He seems to be behind most of the problems here.
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