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An illustration for Rainbow Factory fanfic by Aurora DawnYou can find story here (warning this is not easy story. 18+ probably):
[link]
I really love this. I was trying hard to achieve that dirty sick atmosphere of despear.
There are many people who compare this fanfic to cupcakes and I understand why.
But in my opinion these are completely different.
I tried to put something more than just gore and blood as illustration. Thats because it is not blood that was hard and shocking for me.
I am immune to that kind of stuff so fuck it.
It is - betrayal that was shocking.
While it is much easier to imagine Pinky becoming maniac (she so random ^_^) it is completely impossible for me to fit that kind of acting for Dashy.
Element of Loyalty, I felt cripling horror realising here twisted madness. It was s stunning picture beautiful and horrible by its nature.
This is the moment of Scootaloos shock right before she broke up shoutng in anger.
Every other person in picture is uneven and blurry. It is not about them. The figures behind Scoot are her thoughts about everything happening. Unsure and random.
Those two figures by sides of Dash are two parts of her current mentality.
The guy to the right is rage. overwhelming and powering. the one driving.
The guy to the right is sorrow. I bet you have'nt notices teardroping in midair.
That is because I still loved Dashy while I was reading fanfic. Just like Scootaloo did till the end. And I felt sad for her fall.
It is cool story and I love it because of its strong and powerfull flow, like it was written within single breath.
P.S my English sucks when I try to express myself. sorry about that.
And you can see that there is a gap in the background where you can fly to. There is always an option. Fuck everything and go for it Scoot.
Second part of artcicles illustration: [link]
Ponies belong to Hasbro and Lauren.
Featured at EQD:
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Comments: 274
NalaKega [2017-03-23 16:24:39 +0000 UTC]
I just finished reading this and one point stood out scootaloo thought about how fluttershy who is not a great flyer passed and then they said that they only tested clousdale pegasi...maybe fluttershy wasn't born in clousdale so she didn't have to be tested same with everyone's favorite pegasi derpy
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nitrogain In reply to NalaKega [2017-07-06 16:17:32 +0000 UTC]
If you read Rainbow Factory, read Pegasus Device too. It will explain why Fluttershy didn't get into the Rainbow Factory.
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cheesyberry [2016-06-11 20:32:31 +0000 UTC]
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room
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BlizzardLight [2016-04-11 20:07:58 +0000 UTC]
Place Final registration Pegasus, lol
Not MORGUE, MORPUE (Russian wordplay) Β
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RainbowStriked [2016-02-16 21:27:13 +0000 UTC]
I'm not a huge fan of Rainbow Factory, but this illustration is amazing.
Faved.Β
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ChildSoldier [2014-12-06 00:23:57 +0000 UTC]
"Huston, we have a problem..."
"Copy, what is it?"
"I am in the Rainbow Factory."
"AW HELLL NAW!"
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alexwarlorn [2014-10-18 06:57:37 +0000 UTC]
"Who the buck are you, and where is the real Rainbow Dash?"Β
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BalloonNyan [2014-08-11 05:05:10 +0000 UTC]
WOW, you draw super amazing! Good job! 10 thumbs up (if I had that many)
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lawilmer [2014-06-10 23:16:10 +0000 UTC]
cool... but it makes rainbow dash look like a guy.
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DiscordDashie [2014-05-28 00:39:55 +0000 UTC]
You have beautiful eyes...
LOVE IT
And, it's not 18+ because there's no clop... Just violence and cursing. And gore. It'd be about 13+ MAYBE.
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MysteryEzekude [2014-04-18 20:54:07 +0000 UTC]
Funny how you mention "betrayal" here, because I feel like that's a central theme with the Rainbow Dash in this story (with her betraying Scootaloo and, in her mind, vice-versa).
That's exactly what you have illustrated here in this detailed, well-drawn fanart.
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Awesomekittehlove [2014-04-17 19:35:01 +0000 UTC]
IN DA RAINBOW FACTORY WHERE ALL UR FEARS AND HORRORS COME TRUE
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Jackoy123 [2014-03-04 14:29:50 +0000 UTC]
If you don't like spolier don't read me
There will be Season 8
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Mariathe123 [2014-02-27 14:37:54 +0000 UTC]
, ((Poor sister escotaloo think I will cry; (the kill; (Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β
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Blueman15 [2014-01-27 02:54:41 +0000 UTC]
I didn't find Rainbow Factory disturbing, just a really sad story.. my mind was eternally f***** after Sweet Apple Massacre.... But this is probably the saddest scene in the story... Nice job!
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chao1234 [2013-11-26 10:00:27 +0000 UTC]
I just had a vision of the rainbow factory being destroyed by the royal equestrian army with 30 seconds to mars' "this is war" playing in the background, seemed fitting, because i also imagined rainbow dash and the other workers fighting, but the REA wins on the lyrics "the war is won, a brave new world"
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masky666 [2013-11-02 22:41:26 +0000 UTC]
Me: Hey. Hey Dashie...
RainBow: what.
Me: You have beuatiful eyes....
RainBow: Cool- WAIT wUT?
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idislikecake In reply to masky666 [2013-11-17 05:44:55 +0000 UTC]
now kill that sum o'bitch while she's distracted
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XRainbowFactoryDashX [2013-10-26 05:14:11 +0000 UTC]
My eyes hurt from reading that story. I am thinking while reading "My god! Da fudge!". Β I look at the bottom of the story and stare into the eyesΒ . Β This was what my youtubeΒ account pic was going to be. The words "The fuck" escaped my mouth.I felt horrified by the rainbow factory for the first time.Β Β Β Β I am now thinking how is this possible? I used the rainbow factory as a weapon. Β Β And now I feal likeΒ the rainbow factory is real and that Rainbow DashΒ is behind me prepared for a fight.Β Β I'll tell you if I have any strange dreams. Β Β
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musicveda4765 [2013-10-22 21:06:52 +0000 UTC]
poor Scootaloo... she must be devistated......
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Silver-Shimmer In reply to musicveda4765 [2014-01-21 01:51:12 +0000 UTC]
*poor Scootaloo... she must be dead......
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musicveda4765 In reply to Silver-Shimmer [2014-01-21 23:02:18 +0000 UTC]
well, she will be lol
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captintimm17 In reply to musicveda4765 [2014-05-04 11:46:34 +0000 UTC]
not entirely true, read the sequel to this "Pegasus Device", I'd give it a read
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DeoxysEnderman [2013-10-07 02:48:35 +0000 UTC]
In the rainbow factory, where your fears and horrors come true.
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HufflepuffArtChick [2013-09-15 05:42:00 +0000 UTC]
I loved this. But Cupcakes missed that emotion, that terrible sad feeling. The end made me cry.
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FluffySaber [2013-08-24 15:37:00 +0000 UTC]
poor scoots
Β she must be really scared right now.
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psge [2013-08-07 11:26:50 +0000 UTC]
Pas Cigero. Il tenvio al dunnero.
Sacaze restunna di proverΓ©. Et din callegio paitzerre de terra!
Β
#Luigi
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sleepinqdevils [2013-05-31 22:58:53 +0000 UTC]
Lol.. It sucks my internet has to be a dick and not let me go to the link. I was looking forward to reading it .=.
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Cogetta [2013-05-16 22:35:26 +0000 UTC]
I'd so love for someone to make an animation of this story
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heymai In reply to Cogetta [2013-07-20 00:10:34 +0000 UTC]
im actually in the Rainbow Factory movie im doing the backround sounds
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Bluestar3445 [2013-04-09 01:29:37 +0000 UTC]
H-H-H-H-H-H-HOW COULD SOMEBODY POSSIBLY WRITE THAT!? THAT STORY IS A DISGRACE! I AM TRAUMATIZED BECAUSE OF THAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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thatlittlecreepypony In reply to Bluestar3445 [2013-08-05 19:32:50 +0000 UTC]
*pat pat* calm down...
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davethedog1 [2013-03-03 04:03:50 +0000 UTC]
Just read this about 10 min ago, KILLER ending. Dangit scootaloo, WHY U MAKE ME FEEL BAD
WARNING
SPOILER ALERT
DO NOT READ AHEAD IF DONT WANT SPOILERS
βAny final words, you miserable, worthless *SPOILER ALERT* of a foal?β
Scootaloo brought her chin high, still demanding even the tiniest fraction of dignity.
βYou have beautiful eyes,β she cooed, soft, yet clearly.
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AskSock-N-Socks [2013-02-20 10:17:04 +0000 UTC]
What an awesome and reasonable pic for this! I love your use of darkness
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i-like-pie-so-much-2 [2013-01-31 21:51:52 +0000 UTC]
Well, I saw the video, and I think that's enough.
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KyraStrong [2013-01-28 21:41:08 +0000 UTC]
i like this story better i just cant imagine dash doing any of this
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RarityLover1424 [2013-01-15 20:56:42 +0000 UTC]
This Fanfic was sad.....& Scootaloo last words r stuck in my head, I can Imagine her saying it. "U hav beautiful eyes" It was good 2 tho.
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ConcealedFox [2012-12-17 21:12:43 +0000 UTC]
"We find that the machine works better if the ribs are broken." o.o
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NegraCardio [2012-12-08 03:43:39 +0000 UTC]
the betrayal aspect got me good too really. the bit about how Scootaloo was all that was keeping Dash sane, giving her something to keep at least part of her soul alive in the outside world. With Scoot's failure, Rainbow would loose every last shread of sanity she had managed to keep through her years.
I really don't blame Rainbow for this actually, considering she was forced into the position herself for the Rainboom. the facility broke her, and her despite and frantic mind sought something to latch onto, to keep her soul at least the littlest bit clean. when what she held onto was destroyed: of course she would snap!
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