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Now it's colored!I could use some helpful coloring critiquing on this, I was pretty much unsure of the lightsourcing, but I did have a reference to help a bit.
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WeissesGeschoepf [2013-10-23 19:25:24 +0000 UTC]
*want* *take* *have*
I'd like to see the r-rated aftermath 8D
Rappy ftw ^3^
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Pickfan [2009-12-02 14:11:19 +0000 UTC]
I was looking at your Rappy photo and I made my own version. Take a look
[link]
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darker-then-I-seem [2008-05-17 23:19:36 +0000 UTC]
she's got a nice but and i love the copper tone refrence
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Ulysses-31 [2008-01-07 22:18:17 +0000 UTC]
That bird-thing is a... a... bird-thing after my own heart >_>. Too hot for Sesame Street
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elazuls-core In reply to Ulysses-31 [2008-01-08 17:16:31 +0000 UTC]
Lol, perverted Big Bird... bad!
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elazuls-core In reply to LeoArcticaa [2007-11-14 02:42:40 +0000 UTC]
^____^ Yey, PSO and PSU love!
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Uzazi [2007-10-17 19:36:16 +0000 UTC]
ok, im not the best artist, but i think i can help abit.
for one, although the coloring is great! theres some areas that look lumpy to me though. (the transition from the light of the cheek to the leg, i dunno why either >< thats the only real thing bothering me. and then i was dragging my mouse around to see if the lighting matches the sky for an odd reason. if it looks too vertical then the sun is rising but then i did the diagional and it looked more spot on when i was looking at it. (you know, time of day diffirences the color of the sky.)
college has been doing alot for me when it comes to lighting, though i dont show much of it in my work.
after all im just trying XD im new to critiquing and i have to learn to do so for class. D:
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Uzazi In reply to Uzazi [2007-10-17 19:37:26 +0000 UTC]
oh yeah, you did a spot on job with the water! i know that can be very hard to do, and the rest of the drawing/painting (in a way it is painted) is wonderful!
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ZR-the-hedgehog [2007-10-13 04:34:09 +0000 UTC]
Remember that little girl and that puppy. yea that bird seen the picture of it too and this is what happen.
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chibi-bunni-chan [2007-10-12 07:20:43 +0000 UTC]
HEHEHEHE, cute.
And...the lighting looks fine to me but it's not like I know anything about that.
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Girasols-reflection [2007-10-12 02:24:54 +0000 UTC]
Woo! How cuuute! *instant fave*
Hm...critique? Well her skin looks a little golden, but I think a part of that is because her hair is so purple (not a complaint, mind you) that it contrasts too much. Otherwise, I can't think of much to say. I love the cute background to go with the scene.
The rappy looks so innocent, but we know better!
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GameNinja [2007-10-12 01:24:41 +0000 UTC]
Awsome, you colored it! I like the color and Lighting.
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goldenavatar [2007-10-11 23:10:10 +0000 UTC]
I would've thought that such an advanced civilization would've figured out how to get sun tans without the tan lines, but alas the little bird guy proves to us that we must aim higher. It's cute though, seeing another take on that old Coppertone ad.
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LigerNekoka [2007-10-11 22:38:46 +0000 UTC]
That bird is such a perv. XD
I think the lighting source is superb. It gives the image a very realistic feel. Although I couldn't stare at it very long though because I know it would rot my brain. XDD She's too shiny. Even her untanned butt is shiny! XDDDDDD
Great work, Ken, as always.
And, I want Leynas's hair. >3<
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DamonKatu [2007-10-11 16:33:36 +0000 UTC]
*Kafie X snipes the Rappie*
K-X: Damn you perverted rappies!! I'll make you into cajin rappie gumbo!! *fires a storm of bullets at the rappies*
Woa, its sooo good I cant find anything to say about it....well, she's right about the light 's scourse. Where's it coming from?
Can't wait for PSU: AoI! the De rol le remake is one of the coolest lobbies in the patch.
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feastuponmyashes [2007-10-11 13:38:34 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha, oh man, I hated Rappies when I playe PSO back in the day. XD This is so freakin' cute.
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elazuls-core In reply to feastuponmyashes [2007-10-11 13:43:37 +0000 UTC]
You hated the Rappies? But they were so cute!
Wait. YOU PLAYED PSO? Coool. = D
Play PSU too!
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CrescentBunny [2007-10-11 13:26:16 +0000 UTC]
Too cute! It looks like you did a good job keeping your light source constant which is the biggest factor I get told about so...HOORAY! Plus that shore line makes me drool. Yes.
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elazuls-core In reply to CrescentBunny [2007-10-11 13:45:42 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, hunnybunny.
Eeee, I love a pretty beach shoreline!... I'm thinkin' of doing more practice with coloring them in the future. =3
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CrescentBunny In reply to elazuls-core [2007-10-11 20:20:07 +0000 UTC]
You should! You make them so pretty ^-^
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kewing-darksun [2007-10-11 10:39:10 +0000 UTC]
Help critique about the coloring? You just kidding right? This has to be the best colors I've seen you put out so far. I mean it. It's me who could use some of your tips someday, please.
About the lightsourcing... hmm, it's a difficult matter. I think the shadow that the chocobo porjects over Leyna's leg should be bigger, and her left leg should have a bit more of a birghter spot to the right.
The yellowish skin was on purpose? I think it may look a bit too yellow, but it's shaded so nicely I wouldn't mess with at all.
The rest tho, it's real good. Good job
Seriously bro. I'd like some tips from you on how to get such nice tone gradiation =X
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elazuls-core In reply to kewing-darksun [2007-10-11 13:25:29 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I need critiquing on coloring my art, I'm not perfect, I know I have mistakes, but I don't see 'em till a picture is too far along.
I knew that shadow on her right leg was off! Hm.
Yah, her skin is pretty yellow, huh? It was accidental, and I didn't notice the color being so saturated and yellow till I had gotten into the shading process. So I left it alone, haha. Not good.
But it was kind of a fun attempt at coloring the picture, all around. I'll try to be more attentive to coloring in the next thing I do.
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kewing-darksun In reply to elazuls-core [2007-10-11 14:21:27 +0000 UTC]
Ok I know you can have more crits on it and improve. But seriously, these are really good colors and the overall tone is real good. I can't see how any better can it get. The lightsourcing is one of your problems, yes, but even so you've been making some progress about it from what can I see.
Ah so it was accidentally. Yes it's a bit yellow, but the shading makes up for it. It's no wonder you had fun.
Very nice work overall.
I said chocobo, then I realized it's from PSU... Can't blame my stupidity XD
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elazuls-core In reply to kewing-darksun [2007-10-11 19:33:21 +0000 UTC]
Yah, I'm working on lightsourcing. ;-; It's still a big problem, so I need to pay more attention to it.
Chocobo, Rappy.. about the same thing. x3 They are the token fowl of their respective game series.
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RBL-M1A2Tanker [2007-10-11 06:05:06 +0000 UTC]
"You wear a human disguise to look like human guys, but you're not a man you're a Chicken Boo...."
Sorry, first thing that occurred to me.
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elazuls-core In reply to RBL-M1A2Tanker [2007-10-11 13:21:16 +0000 UTC]
Now everyone around the beach is gonna try to deep fry the Rappy since its cover is blown, hahaha!
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